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• Family Issue

  (#) flower123 2007-02-21

  so they know where she is and now harry knows shes having a girl!omg are they going to be able to get her out of there?update soon

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing, rest assured, the cavalry is on the way.

• Family Issue

  (#) wolfe3 2007-02-21

  original

  Author's response

  Thanx
  

• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-21

  Good chapter. Still a little short for my taste, however you were deliberately abrupt with the Bella/Harry conversation which suited the scene. I hope that you have an update shortly. I'm enjoying this story immensely.
  
  Geovanni Luciano

  Author's response

  Thanks, as always, for reading and taking the time to review. My chapters tend to be a bit short, but I like to update every three to four days, I can combine chapters and publish less often but I think most readers prefer more frequent updates; or rather I do. I'm glad you're enjoying the story; I should have another update tomorrow or Saturday.
  N!
  

• Family Issue

  (#) darthme1011 2007-02-21

  make it a bella/harry/magret

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing. Funny thing, Marietta wasn't even in my original outline, she just kinda wormed her way into the plot and now I find her indispensable; go figure! At this point I’m leaning toward a poly-amorous relationship. Think of it as a Harry sandwich (sounds bad when you say it, doesn’t it?)

• Family Issue

  (#) koppe 2007-02-22

  Great story so far.
  I hope Harry will soon be able to rescue Belatrix and his unborn daughter -- and that he'll be able to put in a good word for her (Bella)... at least so she won't get the kiss and will be allowed visits from her daughter as she grows-up (and yes, I hope for a sequal focusing on the daughter... maybe attending Hogwarts).
  Ideally I'd like Harry, Marie and Bella in some sort of relationship (some sort of marriage?), but I guess Bella may have quite a few years left in Azkaban on general principle.
  I would also love Harry and his squad going on some mission.
  I'd love a little bit about Harry's other friends (Ron, Hermione, ...) -- their reaction to Harry in a relationship with "the Sneak" while expecting a baby with a DeathEater, should be interesting.
  Keep up the good work,
  -Koppe

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and for a very thorough review. You seem to have access to my storyline notes, some of the fun will happen as Harry reunites with his Hogwarts friends and endures or enjoys their various reactions. Think the magical world's equivalent of "Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?"

• Family Issue

  (#) DrT 2007-03-31

  Puir puir Alex (unless his sympathy was designed to draw Bella out?)
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm afraid 'poor poor Alex' is right, he is a victim here. I have to say this, you are my favorite Fanfic author, I always know it's going to be a good day for reading when I spy a DrT update.

• Family Issue

  (#) AmberDragonfly 2007-04-04

  Wow, finally a fanfic written by a grownup. I love your use of the 'subconcious' voices, and the look into the character's psyche.
  Professor of Literature, perhaps?

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and taking the time to review, and your kind comments. I have taught English Composition at my little College in North Florida, but my specialty is something else.

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