- Interesting parental interaction; I liked the idea of questioning James' father's fidelity: it was original and well scripted. I am slightly disappointed that you didn't use the passage of time to define Narcissa's character any more, but that's allright.
I am curious as to if Harry is living in the castle or merely teaching there?
Nice chapter overall. Keep up the good work.
Author's responseThe second line of this chapter states that Harry moved from his muggle hotel to Hogwarts, sorry, I didn't think that needed to be stressed much more than that. Thanks for the review. BJH
- great update i liked his introduction to the hogwarts staff. i cant wit to see how you write his first introduction to the students and how his relationship with his parents develope and how his relationship with narcissa evolves so please update soon.
Author's responseAh, for some of that you will have to wait for the next chapter. Thanks. BJH
- So James is a git, Lily is a potential rival for Narcissa, Draco is as much a git as ever, Ron is more of one, and Hermione and Luna are still themselves? Ginny seems a bit messed up. Interesting characterizations, and I look forward to seeing what you do with them.
Author's responsePerhaps James is such a git BECAUSE he sees Lily as a potetial rival to Narcissa, or at least he is afraid that Harry sees her as such. As for Hermione, maybe, we'll have to see. Thanks for reading. BJH
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