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I'm Seated And Sweating To a Dance Song
7 reviewsVicky should be a journalist... apparently. They all go out in the evening
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Swear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) Fabnosity 2007-02-23
oh yet another great chapter i like the randomness as you put it lol how do you do it!!thanx for the cake ans cokies eats and enjoys i give you ur fave ever food just let me know what it is and u get as much as u want every chapter lol as long as you update hahha im evil thanx for posting luv fabby xxxxAuthor's response
thanku ever so much! i love u for reading my story!! im glad u liked the cake and cookies, lol!! well, if u INSIST on giving me food, then cake/choc/anything sweet will go down well with me! ;D ur not evil, ur just impatient!! only kidding, ill update soon :DSwear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) ahrey 2007-02-23
you are doing a great job keep goingAuthor's response
thankyou, and i will!Swear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) Frenchie189 2007-02-23
I love this story. That update made me crappy day a little better. I gotz rejected. Anywho..
Update soon please.Author's response
aww, im sorry. but it makes me very happy to know that my story cheered u up! so thanku, u cheered me up too! i will, dont worry :DSwear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) Danishgirl9 2007-02-24
Wicked story!
I like it with all it's random-ness.
But Ryan & Jon have boy-cuted Guitar Hero - Ryan says he hates every song it. Which, like Brendon said, is funny cause they did a cover of a song that's on Guitar Hero.
But that was just a little rant from me, I tend to do that a lot.
Ryan singing hehe...apparently Ryan doing vocal warm-ups is the same as guitar hero when it come to being painfull for the ear!
You should really see that interview if you haven't allready, it's the one for Rolling Stone.
It made me laugh a lot, like this story did too.
all right, rant over!
LauraAuthor's response
thanku! it is very random. it reflects what im like. i did see that interview, lol, it was so funny! brendon just kept laughing randomly! yeah, ryan said he hates guitar hero now they have played it THAT MUCH! makes me laugh. i cant believe ryan is taking singing lessons. its very cool, dont get me wrong! thanks again!Swear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-02-24
dances about madly sings "Chocolate cake and cookies, chocolate cake and cookies!!" sings dances again...I love choclate cake and cookies!!
I'm so happy you updated, i keep checking!!! and this chapter was sweet as........
.....chocolate cake and cookies!!!!!
Good choice!!! :):):)Author's response
lmao, glad u liked the cake and cookies! i do too, theyr the best!! thanku, so am i! it had been too long. thanku!! love the simile!! hehe, im hyper now :DSwear I'll Shake it up If You Swear to Listen
(#) meeniemoe 2007-02-24
I'm gonna make a list...otherwise I'm just gonna forget everything I thought about while reading this chapter...
1) Thank GOD I have my internet back; I just caught up on everything you've posted in the last couple weeks or so. Annnnnd, it's amazingly amazing and I'm SO happy about where this is going. Yee-haw. (No, I'm not a cowboy?...)
2) About the interviewing/journalist thing...I hate it when Panic! looks so serious on interviews and you can't decide whether or not to believe them when they say something totally out of this world. =) Glad you put that in your chapter.
3) I have some constructive criticism for you...(don't worry it's just a SUPER minor thing, and I'm just being stupid about it...) I know you're English (my dad's English too, lol) but I think it could make your writing even better if you could try and write in American slang, because 'fancy' and some other typical British terms aren't very...well...American?
4) You have to freaking update, because if you don't, my mother will scream at me for waiting in front of the computer every day for something I won't tell her about. =D So make me happy (and my mother happy) and UPDATE!
5) You're awesome.
xoxoNatalieAuthor's response
yay, im happy its back too, lol!! THANKU!!!! god, i love u 4 reading my story!! lol, they do tend to look kinda serious, but they dont like interviews at all. hehe, thanku, it was another random thing i felt like putting in. yay - constructive criticism! i havnt had any yet, lol. ok, ill giv it a go, but tell me if its totally wrong, ok? i watch enough american programmes to sorta know how u talk! lol. did i say fancy? i cant remember!! LMAOOOOO - ok, we dont want mother getting angry. ill try to make u happy 2DAY! if i can :D thanku! ur awesome too!
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