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Incognita
(#) taliesin 2005-12-30
I like this very foggy, atmospheric. The beggining felt a little sloppy, as if u had an idea and wernt quite sure where it was going. good stuff just tighten it up a bit keep all that great detail but give us a little scope. The last paragraphs were great though. And that ending line-POW- right to the gut. It got me.Incognita
(#) Masako_Moonshade 2006-07-20
This was tragic. Beautiful, tragic, and so...
You've done well with this.
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