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• Falter

  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-28

  AHHHH!!!
  
  That certain someone sounds like a total bitch... making you update at 3:30 in the AM. Geez. I wouldn't put up with that if I were you...
  
  And OMG! Joe always inturrupts! Always, right when it starts to get good. Seriously. He aparently needs a hobby or something to keep out of everyone else's love life. lol. (Same with Pete, but at least in this story he is behaving himself... at least to an extent)
  
  Yay! Gwen is coming along! But why? Hmmm... still seems a little sketchy if you ask me. And Oliver was a total jerk, making her cary her bags out to the bus in the rain. A good bf would have offered before they even got out of the car. lol.
  
  Okay, well, like you said, it's like, 4 AM now and my mind is completely shot. But I loved it! And I seriously cannot wait for more! More Patrick and Peyton!!!! (I'll come back and re-read and possibly re-review when my mind is operating in a smoother manner.) Points!!!

  Author's response

  Damn that Joseph! What is wrong with him?! LOL yes Gwen is quite sketchy, I like her that way. Leaves more to the imagination I say. HAHA if you ever talk to that certain someone let them know that their not a bitch, they helped me get out of my procrastination stage lol

• Falter

  (#) XTinkerbellX 2007-02-28

  omgah..
  hehe..I loved the ending.
  "So Joe,Got anymore gummy bears?"
  It will be an interesting next chapter.

  Author's response

  lol Thank you, I loved it too. I was really craving gummy bears at 3 o'clock this morning haha.

• Falter

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-02-28

  Adorable!

  Author's response

  Thank you!

• Falter

  (#) riaryder 2007-02-28

  'Is this a sign of my impending doom or the end of something much bigger?'
  Ah, that line there just made my day.
  
  Crappy???? Are you kidding, lady. I don't know whether I found this mind bogglingly (??) intriguing or breath-holdingly(??) HOT!
  
  "He knew he was going to fall, but what he did not know was how hard and how fast"
  Yeah, that would be the hot part.
  The anticipation is killing me. Great work. You know you be rated xx

  Author's response

  Lol, yes I had come up with the first line on my way to work when I was being followed by a hearst. haha I told my friends at work that its either my impending doom or something grand is about to happen...lol I have yet to see either and lets hope for the later of the two LOL. And I lover the big words you used, and of course I love double meaning too ;D

• Falter

  (#) CoraLiz 2007-02-28

  MORE!!!!!
  
  Pretty please....?
  Be rated, you sexy lady!

  Author's response

  LOL at the sexy lady, that totally made me smile and laugh, so thank you very much!!

• Falter

  (#) LOVELA 2007-02-28

  Whoa! I even found myself holding my breath! Fabuloso!

  Author's response

  LOL you should of seen me, I actually had to walk away for a moment when I was writing it, I lost my breath too LOL

• Falter

  (#) fob4ever 2007-02-28

  haha. smooth recovery. i like it:) more updates soon?

  Author's response

  Thanks, I try. Yes there will be more soon :)

• Falter

  (#) cnharp 2007-02-28

  no!!! You can't stop there!!! How could you!!!! I'm crushed!! LOL!! !just kidding, well, i'm still crushed!! I can't wait for an update!!!!

  Author's response

  Don't fret my little, umm...reviewer?? there is more, and hopefully Patrick and Peyton will finally DO something note worthy.

• Falter

  (#) Taliax 2007-04-04

  You should write more at 3:00
  That was really exciting, I loved it.
  
  she was about to do an "ut oh"
  tisk tisk

  Author's response

  lol I'm loving the "ut oh" LOLOLOL

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