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Forbidden
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-03-01
gasp!
that.
bitch.
gets out trusty pencil of deathAuthor's response
lol trusty pencil of death lol, now my collegues are looking at me funny I hope your happyForbidden
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-03-01
You are so evil. Here I was all ready for their phone sex. This was a wonderful chapter but you need to take on your brother and use the computer at home so you can update more. Oh and I really really hate Lynn. Oh course that makes her a great character.Author's response
haha sorry about the phone sex. I would take my bro on but the pc is his and he's bigger then me lol. Don't despair though I will update faster for the sake of my readers. I hate Lyn too she's soo hateable lol but you've seen nothing yet.
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(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-03-01
Hell Yeah! Go Glasgow!
chants:"'Mon the weegies! 'mon the Weegies!"...eh, yeah, I'm Glaswegian so i was all excited reading that :)
The Barras are the best!!
growls That DAMN Lyn.......ARGH!! I just knew she was smiling (i could picture it)!!! Brillian chapter! :)Author's response
loooooool I'm glad you enjoyed it, man I love your accent it's so cool and weird so I had to put that in there.Forbidden
(#) McrXRXMyXSavioursX 2007-03-01
OOOOOO THAT SCHEMING LITTLE TRAMP
well omg seriously how dare she i wnat to hit her haha
great story one of my favorites :D
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looool tramp. Feel free to hit Lyn, Zaberdeenz has thrown her in the trash and pinkkissypetefreak has gotten out her trusty pencil of death, so yeah you can hit her lol. I'm one of your faves grins broadly thanks.Forbidden
(#) coffeeaddict 2007-03-01
OI! DON'T LET THEM DO THIS!! NO LYN/GEE!!!....oh the agony...but this is a great story!Author's response
Looool the agony, don't worry it gets better I mean worse oh well you'll just have to wait and see.Forbidden
(#) cnharp 2007-03-01
omg, lyn's such a bitch. I hope she gets it. Gerard and Chy better stay together. Oh well, you're the writer and what you say goes. Anyways, i love the story and can't wait for more. Thanks for the AWESOME story!!!Author's response
Thanks for reviewing, it's not Lyn's fault she such a bitch she can't help it. As for Chey and Gee you'll just have to see(haha that rhymes)sorry lolForbidden
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-03-01
eats cookie and muffin happily
then goes on reading the chapter
founds out about Lyn
hunts her down and throws her into a trashcan
now that that is done.. chapter was awesomeness and you make the characters equal personalities which makes this great.
tried to sound smart
so anywho, keep it comin as soon as you can[:Author's response
Ok don't get fat on the muffin and cookie. I'm hsppy you enjoyed the chpater, I'm glad I'm getting everyones personalities across coz I don't want the whole story to focus just on Gee and Chey(even though it is mostly about them)Thanks for reading see you soon.
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