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Chapter Fifteen: Now, Lets Be Responsible
19 reviewsCar rides... oh goodie, what bad can happen now?
5Exciting
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The Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-02
KatyDidThat (09:55:07): DAMN IT - Ava just go with Patrick on the tour!!! bangs head off desk....
MikaLives (09:55:16): I'm very sorry
MikaLives (09:55:29): I don't think a tour life is her style
KatyDidThat (09:56:15): "but then again, he had had some acting experience "
KatyDidThat (09:56:16): HA!
KatyDidThat (09:56:18): awesome.
KatyDidThat (09:56:31): BEDUSSEY!!
MikaLives (09:57:02): thanks thanks
KatyDidThat (09:59:18): o
KatyDidThat (09:59:18): m
KatyDidThat (09:59:19): g
KatyDidThat (09:59:21): :O
KatyDidThat (09:59:28): YOU CAN'T DO THAT
MikaLives (09:59:37): Truly sorry
KatyDidThat (09:59:41): NO YOU'RE NOT!
KatyDidThat (09:59:46): Get writing - IMMEDIETLEY!
MikaLives (09:59:52): yes I am, I just couldn't write another word
MikaLives (09:59:54): lol
KatyDidThat (10:00:02): But
KatyDidThat (10:00:06): you can't.
KatyDidThat (10:00:08): it's just-
KatyDidThat (10:00:12): the car
KatyDidThat (10:00:13): making out
KatyDidThat (10:00:17): truck>????????
KatyDidThat (10:00:19): ARGH!
MikaLives (10:00:27): I know, I'm going to hell
KatyDidThat (10:00:30): LOLOL
KatyDidThat (10:00:36): Sweety - that was an incredible chapter
KatyDidThat (10:00:45): Watch me do something uber geeky...
MikaLives (10:00:48): thanks
MikaLives (10:00:51): uh ohAuthor's response
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!The Mistake
(#) fobgal1 2007-03-02
GRRRRRRRRRR dont just leave me hanging here!Author's response
I really am sorry... I'll update really soon, I swear!The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-03-02
The insight is absolutely fantastic. I love this whole psycho murderer thing. Super dialogs.Author's response
Thanks! I'm partial to psycho murderer thing, myself!The Mistake
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-03-02
OMG! GRRRRR AT YOU!!! How dare you leave me like this?! Not fair Gwennie (haha gwennie....)!! Ugh, dies.
LOL I absolutely loved it, and you know I do. I loved the little hot scene in the car, very nicely played. haha and I soooo saw "impending danger" in there and I was like, LOL. And the shout out to moi, PRICELESS HAHA! If only I could give you all my rating points, but sadly I don't think this would let me. lol
Too bad I wasn't up at like 4 in the morning LAST NIGHT when you updated. It seems that IS the time to update I guess. So you know what comes next. I ask you to update ASAP and you prolong it five years and then I will prolong mine LOL. That will be the plan stan!
MORE PLEASE AND THANK YOU!!!!!!!
PS. So yeah, why didn't you warn me that you were going to post it HUH?! lolAuthor's response
I am oh so very sorry! And I'm glad you loved it. Even I was very jealous of the action in the car... And you know, you're a human being- sometimes it's a good thing to get this little thing called sleep (I must not be hunam, then because I rarely do). Thank you for the point! I shall take good care of it, I swear.
And PS, we seriously need to learn not to prolong our updates, I've decided...The Mistake
(#) riaryder 2007-03-02
I just couldn't resist sneaking a read at your update in work. If I get caught I'll get murdered. Or sacked, at least.
Pretty soon Patrick is going to associate getting frisky with impending doom. Unless he's a goner of course. There must be a Pavlov's dogs thing in there. Oh, ramble.
Thanks for brightening my day with some drama-rama. I can now face my ward of patients with a wee spring in my step xAuthor's response
HAHAHAHAHAHA! He will start to accociate 'getting frisky' (as you so nicely put it) with bad things, lol. I think this is the third time they've been inturrupted... Poor Patrick. Poor Ava. Pavlov would be very proud of you. Thanks for the wonderful review!!!The Mistake
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-02
HOly Jamalama!!!!
I cannot believe that just happened - so exciting !!!
Points for you times infinity - if that were even possible i would have given them to you no lie- i am madly in love with this story - like true love - love love love love. lol.
udates soon?
xxxxoAuthor's response
Ooo! Times infinity you say? That's quite a compliment. :) I'm so glad you love my story, it really makes my day! :)The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2007-03-02
OH SHIT.
Update soon!
I want to know what happens!!Author's response
Oh shit, indeed...The Mistake
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-03-02
I am continually being surprised by your amazing writing skills. This story just keeps getting better and better every sentence! I love this so much. Your just so amazng. Please do keep up the good work. I look forward to a mystery solved and an extravagant(not to mention sexy) make out scene in celebration! JK!!! lol, but please do update soon!
~RedAuthor's response
Thank you so much for all the praise!!! I'm looking forward to solving this mystery too... I wonder who it's going to be... j/k lol.The Mistake
(#) XTinkerbellX 2007-03-02
Wow...
Is all I can say...
My jaw was litterly dropping at the end of this chapter.
I hope you can update again soon.
^_^Author's response
Ooo, jaw dropping, eh? I'm so happy! And yes, I'll do my best to update soon for all my favorite people... :)The Mistake
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-03-02
updat update update UPDATE!!!!!!!!!Author's response
hmmm... I was thinking about it, but I don't know... j/k
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