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Car rides... oh goodie, what bad can happen now?
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The Mistake
(#) Oreo-child 2007-03-02
...Please don't make us cry! That ending put a chill in my bones!Author's response
Oh, really... chilling bones, that can't be comfortable. May I suggest a jacket or somethig? And don't worry, I don't like to cry either... ;)The Mistake
(#) panic_mcr_lovr 2007-03-02
omg this is such a great story! keep going! i await the next chapter eagerly! very exciting and suspenseful--a cliffhanger at the end of like every chapter. very VERY good story! good job!Author's response
Oh, I like the cliff-hanger deal... I want people to come back and read more!!! And thank you for reading and the amazing review... :)The Mistake
(#) fob4ever 2007-03-02
omgosh!! dont be dead! oh gees. :( i hope everyones alright. more soon i hope!Author's response
Don't you know me at all? LOL Do you really think I'd kill off Patrick or Ava? Geez. ;)The Mistake
(#) Somnambulist 2007-04-19
I just wanted to say that, even though I haven't finished it yet, I am really enjoying your story. A lot of the fan fiction out there is very clichéd and it's all sort of the same. Especially with Bands and such. Girl meets member, they fall in love etc...yours has a real storyline with twists and turns and I just wanted to say that it was a nice change.
Well done. :]
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