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Only in My Dreams
(#) ApplePie 2005-09-26
I think this is a very solid story. Obviously it had a surprise ending, which clinched it for me. I loved reading those last lines and having to readjust my brain. Nice flow and spacing...the words have a good rhythm to them that makes it a fun story to read.
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