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12. I've always been a coward, and i dont know what's good for me
15 reviewsThere's a lot Megan's father does't know. Someone might just fill him in
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A Little More Touch Me
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-03-02
I was feeling sorry for Joe about the ending of the previous chapter. And you picked up on that in this chapter so I don't have to hold a grudge against Meg for putting him in a position like this.
Oh well... this is what gives characters the touch of real people. And it all makes sense.
The way her father's words still get to her, despite all the anger and the wish to embarass him - it intrigues me.
The depth of your stories get me every time...A Little More Touch Me
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-02
You updated! Yay!
So... her family is just absolutely terrible. Ug. I'm so glad Joe and Meg each stood up for one another, it was so touching- seeing how much they really care. Anywho, I thought it was spectacular... they should really have that as a rating option...A Little More Touch Me
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-02
what horrible people. what a fantastic update but tisk tisk .. horrible people.A Little More Touch Me
(#) panic_mcr_lovr 2007-03-02
great story! plz continue. its a great story! eagerly awaiting the next chapter! have i mentioned this is a great story?A Little More Touch Me
(#) fob4ever 2007-03-02
what a dick. excuse my french. what a meany. great story!!A Little More Touch Me
(#) LOVELA 2007-03-04
This chapter was amazing! You went through many emotions in it! SMOOCHES!A Little More Touch Me
(#) xp0lkad0tx 2007-03-11
I don't ask for a CV when I fall in love you know.
I don't know why. But this quote was a hard hitter. Its so true.
This story keeps me so entertained
its sad, funny, intersting and god knows what else all at once.
Loved every second of it. Brett is an ass! You know you got a rating point!
xA Little More Touch Me
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-25
"It's called sex, Daddy. You know that thing you do with your secretary," I shot back. WAHAHAHAHA!! Bullseye!
He simply winked at me and I let myself relax a little. At least he didn't hate me for the position I had put him in. That’s there’s a brilliant line, no lie…
"You are not dressed appropriately for dinner." You know what, Megan is who she is and doesn’t apologise for it, why can’t we all be more like that….
Uh, yes," I mumbled, scared to look at him. God, he had the ability to reduce me to a nervous wreck with two sentences. This was a great way to let the readers know exactly who Megan’s Dad is and what he’s about. He’s a bully. I don’t like him.
oe stood up. "You know, I don't have to sit here and be insulted just because I'm not like you," he pointed at my father. "God forbid your daughter could have a mind of her own. Shouldn't you be proud of her? She got this job because she's the best in her class, and all you can do is insult her!" Hell yeah!!
There were people in my class who were green with envy when I was offered that job. People who's parents would have burst with pride had their son or daughter come home and told them they had an amazing job before they had even finished school. It hurt me so much that the reaction I got was pure horror Awww, Poor wee megs. Can I hug her? She’s totally right though, they should have been proud. Way Proud.
You know what Ria, you’re brilliant. End of.
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