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Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-05
ahh update! ahh fantastic! ahh i love it! and yeah .. thats enough. im in an 'ahh!' kind of mood .. rating point for you!Author's response
ahh moods are fantastic. lol, thank you for reviewing and rating!Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) EmoPoppins 2007-03-05
yay...that was quick...didnt expect you to write this soon. aww...we missed the um...cough scene with her and Patrick that night...hmm...anyways...still loving it...cant wait to read moreeAuthor's response
i know i know i skipped the sex scene i'm sorry, lol but i was thinking of maybe flashing back so you wouldn't miss out on everything.
thank you for reviewing!Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) danceislife 2007-03-05
YAY!!! It's a start. I can deal with a start...Author's response
i can most certainly deal with starts as well. :)
xxxxoBroken Down On Memory Lane
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-05
I was going to start this review out with 'Yay!' like I have a tendency of doing on occasion, but I see a number of people already beat me to it... and I've never been one to copy. :)
Well, I thought this was so good! I can't believe Patrick just left that note on her pillow and snuck out- back to the evil girlfriend... oh, wait, that's fiance, my bad. Patrick really has no clue, does he? lol.
And I feel really sorry for Kate! She is in SUCH a tough position... trying to please her brother while not wanting to hurt herself even more by having to see Patrick- engaged no less. Yeah, that would majorly suck.
Anywho, I thought it was put together nicely as always. I get so excited to see that you've posted!!! So post more soon!!! Points, points to you my dear! (Ok, I'll lay off the '!'. I know I can be a little creepy like that. lol)Author's response
patrick is clueless to the max, lol.
but we both knew that - yay for Kate being a badass and yay for rating points.
(see i added yay's for you so you didn't feel like you missed out on anything. lol)Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) duckapple 2007-03-05
Oh my.
Wow.
I love you.Author's response
:D you always make me smile!
as always love you toooo!
xxxoBroken Down On Memory Lane
(#) cnharp 2007-03-05
i seriously HATE asstrick now. Oh yeah, that's my new name for him, asstrick!!!! LOL!! i think it fits perfectly to him in this one. Well, i can't wait to see how this one goes and i'll be checking for updates!!! Thanks for the awesome work!!!Author's response
haha asstrick - that made me laugh but don't hate him he's still learning how not to be a stupid ass.
:)Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-03-06
I can't believe that Patrick just left with a note. "XO". Now, I really feel like listening to that song. LOL. Anyways...I can't wait until you have them singing the song together. The tension...yeah, can't wait. XDAuthor's response
funny enough i was totally listening to that song when i was writing the chapter hence the contents of the note so 'taadaa' lol - thats my secret dish for today.
:)Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-17
Ach! You write so well, it kinda makes me feel sick. In a good way. If ever there is a good way to be sick...y'know like after drinking a heckload of alcopops and vomiting and feeling even better afterwards...yeah
this wasn't very was it - I meant it in the nicest possible way! lolAuthor's response
aww don't feel sick. lol. thank you very much though.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) jaredletoinconverse 2007-03-17
ahh!! I love this story! It gets better with ever freakin' chapter!!Author's response
lol i'm trying my best to keep you entertained. :-DBroken Down On Memory Lane
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-29
I love that they have to sneak stuff by her. Classic.
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