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Six - How I Met Your Mother.
15 reviewsok so i totally wanted to hold off putting up ch.6 until i was convinced that you guys liked ch.5 but i have no self control so here it is, ch.6! but don't let me down, y'all still have to show me ...
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Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) danceislife 2007-03-07
OOOOO!!! She's SOOO pregnant with HIS kid...hahaha...
oh, I love it. Really, I do...Author's response
lol thank you.
:)Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-03-07
dies Oh, my gawd. Pregnant? For serious?! I'm so excited for the next part! And I just LOVE how you update so frequently. You rock my world. ;D
P.s. And Patrick's parents not liking his fiance was awesome. Woo! Score for Kate! LOL.Author's response
lmao - you make me smile.
:)Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-07
Again, so 'EXCITING'! I'm practically bouncing in my seat.
AND OMG!!!! This chapter was just full of funny things. You know, I just realized who Meg reminds me of... You know that movie School of Rock with Jack Black? Ned's girlfriend? Yeah, that's who Meg reminds me of... all bossy and pushy. And Patrick needs to grow some balls or something. Meg is terrible. Can't he see Kate is just perfect? Of course not... he's blind when it comes to that stuff... Though he IS a total ass in this story, I still have to love him. You do a good job of not pushing past that line- where we're still irritated with him, but we still want him to get with our leading lady. If he was too muach of a jerk it wouldn't work. Awesome job!
And Pregnant???? It's totally Patrick's. He's going to have to come to his senses soon. And Kate needs to get a pregnancy test asap.
Sooo... I know you've already produced a lot in one day and while I fully appreciate your hard work and dedication, I'm still a very selfish being wanting MORE!!!!Author's response
OMG YESSSS she is totally like that chick, that makes me laugh.
lmao, preggers maybe i dunno.
ok well yes i do know the answer but my lips are sealed.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-07
ahhh! im in shock and i need more! i came home from an uneventful night tonight to the happiness of not one but TWO chapters updating and it made me sooo happy. i practically thrive for this story and as always (maybe even more than usual right now) i cannot cannot wait for more!Author's response
:)
i'm glad i made your night better.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) duckapple 2007-03-07
uh oh.
Patty's gonna be a daddy.Author's response
that rhymed. hehe.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-03-08
Loved it. It keeps getting better.Author's response
:)
xxoBroken Down On Memory Lane
(#) rainydaykid13 2007-03-08
whoa. by far my favorite chapter. i love how his parents hate his fiance. awesome. update soon!!!Author's response
yes that made me happy as well.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) Emo_Sami 2007-03-10
Ooh, is she? I WANNA KNOW!Author's response
my lips are sealed. :)Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) EmoPoppins 2007-03-13
i really love this story...hope you write more asap!!!!!!Author's response
i'll do my best.
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