(#) zaberdeenz 2007-03-09maybe Gerard still wants to know cause he feel like he has unsolved things in his past and he cant go on without dealing with them?
i love how you drop information in little bits and take it slow with dates and everything, like you never rush from evening to lets say two months ahead, that keeps this interesting and you really cant wait to get to read new chapters.
and i really like Monica. like as a character, you write her frikkin welll.
aaaand excellent chap as usual. keep it comiiing^___^
(#) Caitydidsworld 2007-03-09Oh my frickin' God. I just read this entire story. It took the better part of a week, but was it worth it. WOW! You give me hope that someday I can write, too. Keep it up and update soon.
Author's responseThanks for taking the time to read this story. You can be a writer, trust me. Just try, write whats in your heart and don't take any shit from anyone. Never give up. Thanks again. - SanDee
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