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Chapter 22
11 reviewsBob and Amber's date is sabotaged, Lyn get's one step closer to her target and Gerard feels like he's missed out.
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(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-03-11
ARGH! God DAMN you Gerard Way (but not really) Chey is right beside you!!!
Gerard needs slapped across the face...and Lyn needs to be shipped off to Mars or somethin!
Brilliant as always!!! :)Author's response
Lol I agree Gerard needs a slap and maybe he'll get one. Lyn needs to stick around for a bit longer I promise when I'm done with her I'll ship her off to mars for you. Thanks for reviewing see you next chapter.Forbidden
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-03-11
damn it gerard!
you're not missing anything!
Lyn is evil.
I hate her.
But I love this story.
And you know what? I always ask about
gerard not being able to grow facial hair. haha. I mean, this guy NEVER has any stubble! lol.Author's response
He is missing something, he's missing the unpleasantness of Lyn's company. I'm glad Gee can't grow a beard I don't like them that much and I think'd he'd look weird with one. Frank looks cute/weird with one.Forbidden
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-03-11
Love Frank and Jamia so much!!! Great chapter but I still want to smack Gerard. Why can't this guy just get over his past? Oh, and Gee cooking?? Love it! Write more I command it.Author's response
I like Jamia and Frank too I'm glad I developed their characters, in the begining I wasn't really going to but I'm glad I did. As for Gee cooking I'm sure someone'll get food poisoning sooner or later.Forbidden
(#) cutegirl12356 2007-03-11
OMG...can't wait for more!Author's response
I know me neither and I'm writing itForbidden
(#) McrXRXMyXSavioursX 2007-03-12
NOOOOOOOO he cant do that...i mean like uhhh think about her haha
sluuuut she is
love itAuthor's response
Hey Lyn isn't a slut she's a hussy lol. You sound frustrated lol I like itForbidden
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-03-13
you made me smile and giggle so many times while reading this chapter! first of all, Amber was so funny when slamming the door repeatetly on Bob. LMAO and i like that you dont leave anyone alone, all boys have their girls. stares at the sentence, doesnt like it,but leaves it there anyway but you got my point right? Bob and Amber are nice together too, cause they're both kinda shy, but still such cutiepies. and for some reason, i have no problem to imagine Gerard Way saying 'dildo'. ROFL btw, its was so cute too when Gee was so proud of his cooking.
then lets get to the dirt. to the little special piece of trash called Lyn. i hate her. and thats good, cause you know, you can write characters that are sweet to hate. but we have to get rid of her, she cant come and mess up with Gerard.
grabs Lyns hand, drags her to airport and throws her to a plane to South Pole sits back and waits for next chapter [[:Author's response
I've been waiting for you grins broadly. Gosh where do I start with this review. Dildo-I wasn't gonna write that in and then I thought if Gerard can say he knows how to ride the mechanical bull, then I can write that he says dildo lol.
Special piece of trash lol you have a way with words, what a lovely way to describe someone.
I'm glad I'm getting everyones personalities across and I love writing Bob and Ambers parts coz there relationship is so cute and new...for now mwhahaha. Anyhoo I gotta go now, thanx to someone(no names mentioning)I have to go to the southpole and get Lyn back coz she's in the next chapter runs to the airport
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