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my life now
2 reviewsseventeen year old delilah is being sent to live in the english countryside with her long lost cousins. She never even met or knew she had when england is being attacked and occupied by an unnamed ...
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my life now
(#) darks00 2007-03-13
Welcome to ficwad, Jessica. Nice to see a new face. Great start for your story. Please be careful with puncuation. When you say someone's name in a story, example, Julius, it should be capital for it's a name. I'm not critizing you, I'm just trying to help. Great story so far, please update soon! :)
xxDarkness' Kidxx
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