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Loves Punishment (CHAPTER 17 IS UP! READ!!!)
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-13
I adored this, I wanted you to know that, but I'm scared, is this finished??
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NO!!! LoL. It seemed that way didn't it?! This is just the beginning!Loves Punishment (CHAPTER 17 IS UP! READ!!!)
(#) fobgal1 2007-03-13
MORE! MORE! MORE!Author's response
Ok... A couple days till the next one! Thanks for the review!Loves Punishment (CHAPTER 17 IS UP! READ!!!)
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-03-13
Awesome story. Love it. Can't wait to read more!!Author's response
Glad you liked it! More soon!Loves Punishment (CHAPTER 17 IS UP! READ!!!)
(#) theblondeone0828 2007-03-13
you're an amazing writer.
ahhh it sounded like the end. uh oh.
lovelovelovelove it.Author's response
Thank you! I'm so glad you like the story!Loves Punishment (CHAPTER 17 IS UP! READ!!!)
(#) riaryder 2007-03-13
Can you say 'perfect'?
Because that's exactly what it was. None of the unnecessary, and certainly nothing smutty, which some of us are guilty of a lot of the time.
The emotion was the important thing here and you portrayed that perfectly.
Well done, sincerely.Author's response
You know I'm glad you noticed that I tried to make it semi tasteful. I'm not very good with writing tha kind of thing, but I wanted there to be a chapter like this one. There kind of needed to be one. I'm glad I conveyed some kind of emotion that you picked up on. Thank you for the great review!Loves Punishment (CHAPTER 17 IS UP! READ!!!)
(#) LOVELA 2007-03-13
I don't think that this could have been written any better. Muy Smooches to you my dear.Author's response
There is always room for improvement, but thank you! That means a lot to me! Smooches back!
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