I adored this, I wanted you to know that, but I'm scared, is this finished??
NO!!! LoL. It seemed that way didn't it?! This is just the beginning!
MORE! MORE! MORE!
Ok... A couple days till the next one! Thanks for the review!
Awesome story. Love it. Can't wait to read more!!
Glad you liked it! More soon!
you're an amazing writer.
ahhh it sounded like the end. uh oh.
Thank you! I'm so glad you like the story!
Can you say 'perfect'?
Because that's exactly what it was. None of the unnecessary, and certainly nothing smutty, which some of us are guilty of a lot of the time.
The emotion was the important thing here and you portrayed that perfectly.
Well done, sincerely.
You know I'm glad you noticed that I tried to make it semi tasteful. I'm not very good with writing tha kind of thing, but I wanted there to be a chapter like this one. There kind of needed to be one. I'm glad I conveyed some kind of emotion that you picked up on. Thank you for the great review!
I don't think that this could have been written any better. Muy Smooches to you my dear.
There is always room for improvement, but thank you! That means a lot to me! Smooches back!
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