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A group of teens go out to party over spring break but the fun soon turns to horror as something hunts them down one at a time.

Category: Horror - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Warnings: [V] [X] [Y] - Published: 2005-10-01 - Updated: 2005-10-02 - 7474 words - Complete

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Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

(#) LadyLacrymosa 2005-11-18

Hey, this is pretty good. But if I may make some observations? Perhapse a bit of dialouge a bit sooner in the story may help the reader get a better feel for the characters, also, check your spelling on a couple of places. But I do like this a lot, can't wait for more. Good job...

Life's a song, sing along.-Lady Lacrymosa
Author's response
Thanks for the input, I went back and made some changes so if you get the urge feel free to have a look and see what you think. I also encourage you to check out some of my other stories I have quite a few
Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

(#) Togot 2005-11-19

Thanks for the input, I went back and made some changes so if you get the urge feel free to have a look and see what you think, I also encourage you to check out some of my other stories I have quite a few
Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

(#) Tippsiwon 2007-11-04

loved this one Sweetie it was soo cool ttyl
Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

(#) hellhound13 2012-02-18

well this story certainly got my attention it was great i like how it was a werewolf