Categories > Celebrities > Panic! At The Disco > Down the road, not across the street
Robbing lips, kissing banks under this moon.
7 reviewsWhat can I say it's a long night. I don't want to give away any spoilers so just read it. Title says it all.
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Down the road, not across the street
(#) Geets 2007-03-24
wow, this story just gets better and better! i do feel ryan's pain, lol. (btw, i dont have that jimmy eat world song, so sorry but i couldnt listen to it, lol) very good!Author's response
Thanks for the feedback. Guess I'm going on the right track. HOPE you ENJOY the next chap. =p
feel his pain. FEEL IT I SAY! oh what? OH you DO feel his pain!
hahahahaha jkz!Down the road, not across the street
(#) xbobxluvrx 2007-03-24
YAY I WUVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's response
Yay me! XDDown the road, not across the street
(#) meeniemoe 2007-03-25
Aww, thanks hon! I was being honest =) (in response to your response to my last comment from your last chapter...wow, if you got that...i seriously pat you on the back...)
And btw, that song was excellent for setting the mood. I seriously had nothing better to do, so I came here looking for stories to read, when I found that your story was updated!! I went to youtube and looked up the lyrics and everything...but I accidentally did it before you indicated when to play it at 1:08. It still worked out really well though. (Constructive criticism: in addition to that great song alongisde your writing, you should make your writing a bit more fluffier with description...like a little bit more of how much torture ryan was feeling, i.e. similies and metaphors would come into play here)
but it was still FRIGGING AWESOME. :D With that said, I think i'll stop commenting now because this is probably the longest one i've ever left...yeah. xD
xoxo natAuthor's response
yay! good to hear the song was effective. I'll keep your constructive criticism in mind for the following chaps. =]Down the road, not across the street
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-03-25
Awwww... I feel so bad for Ry. :( But I think you managed to pull of the chapter well. Bravo! Can't wait to see what you write up next! ;DAuthor's response
bows to the left, bows to the right
Thank you. Thank you.
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