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The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2007-03-31
Oh shit, Matthew.
This chapter made me giggle. The damn BN. LOL.
I love it update soon.Author's response
Ooo, giggle??? Nice. And the BN is totally annoying...The Mistake
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-04-02
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Kay...HOORAY FOR CELEBRATORY MAKE-OUT SCENES WHICH SHOULD'VE(IF PATRICK WASN'T AS HURT)TURNED INTO A CELEBRATORY SEX SCENE!!!!!!!!!!
BOO FOR BITCHY NURSES WHO TRY TO STEAL PATRICK FROM AVA!!!!!!
HOORAY FOR PATRICK CALLING AVA AND HIM A THING!!!!!!!!
BOO FOR PETE NOT SHOWING UP TO SEE POOR PATRICK RIGHT AWAY!!!!!!!!!
HOORAY FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!
Okay....I'm all done.
:D PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I'm dying without this.
Love
Mrs. LetoAuthor's response
Ooo, a sex scene you say? Sounds like fun... maybe soon, you know, after Patrick is well enough to... perform and all. I'm glad you're excited!!! This review totally made me smile. :DThe Mistake
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-04-02
Btw
YOU HAVE WON!!!!!!!!!!
To Claim Your Prize Please Contact Me At Once!!!!Author's response
A prize?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I LOVE PRIZES!!!!!The Mistake
(#) CoraLiz 2007-04-03
Ava felt her eyes widen and her body take a more defensive stance; if this girl wanted to play this game then Ava was more than willing to jump in the ring. What have you been doing, Gwen? Watching boxing or something??
Wendy was found in a barn, Matthew found in a junk yard... yup, definately sounds like the work of the mob.
You finally put them together!!! About time, too. I was getting tired of the 'does he think we're a thing' 'he's too good for me' deal. Ava is amazing. She needs to get that through her tiny little head. Obviously Patrick sees it.
I tried to rate but it would not let me. I think you're becoming much too popular for your own good.Author's response
Nooo... boxing? Me? Silly Cora... You know you love me. ;)The Mistake
(#) riaryder 2007-04-03
I can't tell you how many times I've tried to review. Ficwad just keeps crashing on me :-(
Anyway. AAAARRRGGHHH!
I totally thought Matthew was a bad guy. How wrong was I?
And nice hot make-out scene. Damn them nurses!!
Great update Gwen. I missed this story so much.
And I take back calling you a slacker, cos this update was worth all the waiting ;-)Author's response
Stupid Ficwad!!!! And I don't think you were alone in thinking that Matthew was not so good. And it's totally fine that you called me a slacker, because you know, it was kinda true!!!The Mistake
(#) Oreo-child 2007-04-05
That was truly heartstopping! Between near death and an actual death, I wanted to faint!Author's response
Yay!!! I'm glad you really felt the chapter. You know, you make me want to keep writing, like, all the time. Thanks so mych dearie!!!The Mistake
(#) LaBellaMuerte 2007-04-09
of my freaking god! it just keeps getting better and better!Author's response
I'm glad you think so!!! The praise totally makes my day/month/year/life!The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-14
"Perhaps you don't really understand who Mr. Stump is." The girl continued. "If I were to let just anyone who claimed to know him in, then it could become a real problem. I have to respect his privacy." Ava wondered how long Patrick would be awake before BN asked for an autograph. -> Ha ha ha… awesome.
/ "Oh yeah." She admitted, "I'm only after you for the fame and fortune... I mean, what does a girl have to do to get herself in People."
Patrick laughed. "Hang out with Pete. I'm afraid you've associated yourself with the wrong guy for that one."/ -> Why do I like this little exchange so much? Oh yeah, because I can actually imagine Patrick saying that! :)
Loved Patrick watching the verbal cat fight… ah, he’s just too cute in your story.
This update rocked SUPER hard. Monk-e-mail hard! ;)The Mistake
(#) ssketchator 2007-06-01
Is it okay to be glad that Matthew's dead? Maybe not glad, but relieved. Or un-unhappy. Not happy, but not not happy, you know what I mean?
Anyhow, I'm stoked he's out of the picture. I didn't like him.
I also don't think it has anything to do with the mob. But that's just me. I'm excited to see what comes next!
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