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The Mistake
(#) Lizzard 2007-03-30
HOLY COWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! amazing, amazing job! I kinda suspected that Matthew ws wworking with the mob against Ava, but I'm apparentlywrong at this point... but this story has taken so many twists and turns that you never could know...Author's response
Yay! I hope that's a GOOD 'HOLY COWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!' :) I'm glad I'm keeping you on your toes...The Mistake
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-03-30
GAH! I can't believe my dear that someone reviewed before me UGH! LOL but I guess thats what pay backs are huh
lol anywho onto my review...OMG WTF! LOL why couldn't they just rip off all their clothes and get it on in a hospital bed..Patrick didn't seem to mind to much LOL and I'm SURE it wouldn't of been TO TOO bad lol...and the whole discovering Mathew...very coy my dear friend very coy...
Ah, and of course...Hmmm I wonder WHO Patrick phoned to see who Ava maybe staying with..this has me very interested lol
Definetly worth the wait! lol your not online right now so I can gab your ear off so I will just text you later! WOOT!!! SOO HAPPY!!!Author's response
Well, I guess this time you just weren't fast enough... lol. And I wish they would just hury up and rip their clothes off too, but I just don't think that either of them are THAT forward. Oh well... I have no idea who Ava will be staying with. lol. If you have any clue please let me know because that's coming up fairly soon. ;) Oh, and PS, you're like, never online anymore! What's up with that?The Mistake
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-30
Ok so adding to our hitlist - Bitch Waddington the Nurse, I would say the Mob but those suckers scare the poop out of me so I say we steer clear of killing off 'The Family.'
And you have no idea how the 'love' scene made my day I was in the middle of reading when I blurted outloud, mind you,
"Oh My God They Are Going To Have Sex In The Hospital!!!!"
which they didn't but it's perfectly understandable 'cause Patrick is all broken and injured and such - but it still made my day and you did a wonderful job writing it.
I am so excited that you updated, I can't wait for more - this story really has me on the edge of my seat, actually I think I will start getting 'The Mistake' cravings which I don't know how I will live though.
Fantastic Job - POINTSSS INFINITY FOR YOU!
xxxxoAuthor's response
Ok, so I'm sitting here, trying very hard to not have essay-like responses to this because that would jsut be a little crazy... nah, nevermind. Anyway, I would never put anyone in the mob on a hitlist either. Those suckers are MEAN... (I mean, very kind and generous, I love you, Mob!!!) And really... sex in a hospital? I really made you believe that they would go that far? Wow. I'm glad you liked it because that scene gave me the most trouble... Oh! And hopefully I'll update again soon to your cravings don't get too bad. If they're anything like my 'we'll make them so jealous' and 'memory lane' cravings then I definately understand your pain... Yay for points!!! You're amazing, Alex! shit, this is totally an essay...The Mistake
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-30
Oh I forgot to add,
Mathew, Dead?
What?
Totally unexpected - you amaze me with your suprises.
lovexxxxoAuthor's response
Oh yes, I'm glad you were surprised. ;) Thake THAT all you Matthew-haters! lolThe Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2007-03-30
Exciting, moving, hot, libertaing, exasperating, fornicating? (?)
xxxx
You, ym dear are marvelous!Author's response
Yay! I'm glad you think so. ;)The Mistake
(#) fobgal1 2007-03-30
Damn thats a lot of drama! I loved it! Update soon please!Author's response
I DO love the drama... I'm glad you loved and I will do my best to update asap!The Mistake
(#) fob4ever 2007-03-30
omgosh! this is crazy :) i can barely contain myself. hehe. weeellll i hope you get some updates soon.
:)Author's response
Crazy??? Yay! I'll try my best to update soon!!!The Mistake
(#) XTinkerbellX 2007-03-30
Oh my God!
That last sentence made my breath catch in my throat.
Holy freaking crap...now Matt is gone too?
Geeze....This story is amazing.It gets better and better every chapter.
Yeah,the day my internet deicides to be mean is the day you update.
lol.Author's response
Yep, Matthew is dead. I bet you're sad, right? lol. I'm so glad you think my story is amazing, I can't tell you how very happy that makes me. :) I'm truly sorry about your internet... mine has been crappy lately as well.The Mistake
(#) JokeMeKisses 2007-03-30
Gwen - This chapter was absolutely amazing! I had missed Ava and Patrick constantly denying what was obviously there all along, and now, honestly, I'm pretty glad there will be no more of that. At least I hope not.
I'm not sure how much I can say I saw it coming. It might have been more of a thought at the back of my mind that was quickly over-ridden with a "No. She wouldn't kill him too." Poor Matthew.Author's response
I am so glad you enjoyed it!!! And I seriously doubt there will be any more of the whole 'does he like me? are we an item?' stuff. So you're safe. :)
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