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Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) Melim 2007-03-30
Amazing. And I don't care what you say, I was totally helping you out without falling asleep like I wanted to. And this chapter was quite funny, and again right on track. "Smile for me Daddy" and the whole Sophia Bush thing, and everything. Just amazing.Author's response
i like how you enjoy taunting everyone with the fact that you know what the hell is going to happen. and yes, you did help mewhile not falling asleep, good job, you are amazing.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) duckapple 2007-03-30
Wow.
Amazing.
I love Pete's kids.Author's response
haha, yeah, Pete's kids are very Pete-esque.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-30
this chapter made me smile and im happy it didnt leave me with my mouth wide open or ready to scream or even cry. yay for no unhappiness at the moment! thanks for the timely update, you're the bestest ever =)Author's response
yay for smiley chapters, i thought it necessary to throw a few of those in after i hit y'all with a ton of bricks last chapter. i'm glad you liked it.
:)Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) cnharp 2007-03-30
yeah!! updates make me happy!!! LOL!! due, i'm starting to slack, i'm not the first again!! AAAWWWWWWW!! oh well!! LOL! how are they going to convince that it's joe's baby if she can't even keep a straight face when she thinks of kissing him. funny funny. anyways, i always start to ramble so i better go. wait, ok, what will my word be today? i think it will be, well, i don't really know. i guess you'll just have to miss out. asstrick is still being asstrick. well, i better go, i'm still rambling! cookies for you! xo - cassiAuthor's response
Yay for cookies!Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) fob4ever 2007-03-30
i love this! i laughed a couple times:) daramaaaa. more soon peas!!Author's response
:) i'm glad you enjoyed it.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) danceislife 2007-03-30
SOOO FUNNY! I almost fell off my bed laughing. Wow...Author's response
lol, yay for funny.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-03-30
Awesome. Simply awesome. I missed the previous chapter, so I had to catch up a little! Grrr at starting college and not having internet access in my dorm room! Ugh! In short...it's simply, mah-vah-les. CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE VIDEO PETE'S TALKING ABOUT! squeelsAuthor's response
thank you my love. your reviews are alaways much appreciated.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-03-30
I love this story and can't get enough!!!Author's response
:) i'm really glad that you like it,
thank you for reviewing.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-31
I think I'm review 100!!! I feel so special... you know, I think I'm going to pretend that was what I was going for all along instead of admiting to be really late in realizing you updated. Yes, lame excuse judging by the fact that you told me you'd have another chapter up by tonight.
So, while this last little bit wasn't earth shattering or anything like that, it really gave us a look into what these characters are thinking. You, of course have made me completely fall in love with Joe. I can't get enough of him in your story; "Kate blew him a kiss and waved goodbye as Joe caught the kiss and put in his pocket before getting into his car and driving away." Totally sweet and shows how close they really are.
There were a lot of things I really loved in this chapter: The string engagement ring (Yes, I know it was more in the last one but it was reintroduced here so I don't feel too late in commenting) reminded me so much of the Count of Monte Cristo. Though, in this case I tried to not get too attached and think it oh-so romantic because really, it's Joe and Kate... they should not be together in the grand scheme of things. Secondly, Pete running around, chasing his crazy children who love to sing random lyrics was too funny to picture. Those children really would be insane to handle. Thirdly, I really just liked the test Sara gave Kate to prove that she really was in love with Patrick instead of Joe. I think I'm going to use that on one particular friend of mine... I'll see if it really works. ;) And finally, She's friends with Sophia??? I love it!!!
Ok, so that was incredibly long and rediculous- I'm guessing... I never actually reread and see. Maybe that would be smart but it's like 5:30 in the morning here. My review is already most likely suffering from sleep deprivation. Lucky you. lol
Oooookkkk... I'm going to go now and attempt to give you points... I hope there are still some left after eight people have reviewed before me. Grr. Soo, I can't wait for more my dear! You are so fantastically amazing I doubt I can really put my thoughts into words!Author's response
well my love you were busy cleaning and such and then entertaining guests so you were totally not expected to review right away, but i do love your essay, well in this case, novel reviews they always make my day times infinity, i do not know what i would do without your support.
lovvvve.
xxxxo.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-08
Ach, kudos to the kids scene, I adore children. It was awesome, they make for such great writing. I loved it!
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(Sorry I only just realized thst having you in my favourites, doesn't actually quanitify for being notified when you update....)
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