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Chapter 9
11 reviewsPeyton Clarkson's boyfriend had just signed with one of the biggest recording companies around, and now hes heading out to tour with another major band, Fall Out Boy. What happens when he can't alw...
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(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-02
AH! Rindi, my dear, you've done it again... Filled this chapter so full of EXCITMENT that I can hardly contain myself...
Sooo... I can't help but feel sorry for every singly one of the characters except Oliver who is a total jerk. Well, and there is no need to feel bad for Andy and Joe who don't have a lot of drama, but the rest of them (namely Patrick, Peyton, and Gwen) I kind of want to hug. Well, and there is Pete who is actually trying to help... I just want to hug him because he's being so damn adorable.
But where are you going with all this??? Surely, eventually there will be a happy moment... and surely we'll discover what Oliver is taking to make him such a jackass... I mean, come on!!! Give me something!!!!
Other than all the frustration I am currently feeling, I think this chapter was written quite well and you have no reason to fret over this posting. You are amazing my dear!!! I kinda love you for this story!!!
Anywho, now that you discovered writing on the computer, I think you need to update ASAP!!!!Author's response
LOLOLOLOLOLOL Gwen you seriously make my day with your odd ball comments. lol I'm pretty sure I let you preview this whole chapter and yet your still excited about it haha I must have accomplished something I guess.
Don't worry about the happy moments...I do have one planned for maybe the next chapter. I needed the gloom lol I need you feel what is coming...even though they don't.
and I kinda love ya for reviewing too LOL and I'm so happy to type it out now instead of the notebook, to bad I can't burn it for making me have carapal tunnel LOL.Falter
(#) angeltearsburn 2007-04-03
hey dont regret this post it was good no wait it was so much better love to see you keep going with the story.Falter
(#) CoraLiz 2007-04-03
What?!?!?! I always knew Gwen was a little hoe (just kidding Gwen).
This chapter was super great. I started reading the very first bit and discovered that I've already read this, I'm just extremely behind. You may feel free to flogg me now.
Update soon so I have something to read!Author's response
haha you have Gwen pegged lol jk but thank you!!Falter
(#) riaryder 2007-04-03
Hey, lady it was a great chapter. So no need to worry about posting it.
This is just a great story, and it appears you can really do no wrong with it. I'm loving it xxxxAuthor's response
Well thank you very much...you have totally made my day by saying that. LOL watch the next chapter suck LOLFalter
(#) jaredletoinconverse 2007-04-03
I luv luv luv this story so far. You totally have me hooked! Joe really does ruin everything! errr... Joe... Please update soon!Author's response
He seems to always be where everyone is at and sure knows how to ruin a situation lol whether it be good or bad..but I still heart him all the sameFalter
(#) LOVELA 2007-04-03
This chapter was FULL of drama, which is a-ok in my book. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Will there be some fists flying between Patrick and Oliver??? Exciting!Author's response
Yes the drama llama has escaped and has attacked my story..I advise all of mankind to run lolFalter
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-03
amazing update, you make me smile to the max.Author's response
aw! and you make me smile to the max too lolFalter
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-05
Finished it so far and ...I love it. Can't wait for more.Author's response
Thank you sooo much!
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