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• Family Issue

  (#) DrT 2007-04-04

  thanks for the explanation of 'dog robber'. Reminds me of a character in the old comedy 'Operation Petticoat' (or 'the scrounger' in 'the Great Escape' for that matter), although I doubt if this one could be that bright.
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and taking the time out to review, and thanks for your kind comments. Love your work, truly.
  N!

• Family Issue

  (#) shaman_king 2007-04-04

  Great chapter, as always. About your ghost raters, pay no attention to them; they probably have nothing better to do, so they amuse themselves nagging others. I mean, I would understand if some people didn't like this story, I'd even understand an OOC rating, but ratings such as Cliché, Mary Sue, Illiterate or Train Wreck are extremelly unfair to this story.
  
  Keep up the good work, you're a great writter.
  
  P.S. Even though your story appears on the summaries page with the rating of 4, I can't seem to rate it up, as it says it reached the maximum of 5. Weird.

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing, and your kind words. One of my other correspondents said you could up a rating by going to the individual chapter and upping that chapter's rating unless it's already rated a '5' I did that for DrT's story and it seemed to work. Check out "Re-Ordered by DrT, it's a goodun!

• Family Issue

  (#) shaman_king 2007-04-04

  Great chapter, as always. About your ghost raters, pay no attention to them; they probably have nothing better to do, so they amuse themselves nagging others. I mean, I would understand if some people didn't like this story, I'd even understand an OOC rating, but ratings such as Cliché, Mary Sue, Illiterate or Train Wreck are extremelly unfair to this story.
  
  Keep up the good work, you're a great writter.
  
  P.S. Even though your story appears on the summaries page with the rating of 4, I can't seem to rate it up, as it says it reached the maximum of 5. Weird.

• Family Issue

  (#) twilliams1797 2007-04-04

  I would never have thought of putting together Harry and
  Marietta and Belle.. this is a fine story, and quite original I think.. so all in all this can be listed as a positive review..

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing, it really helps. Feels positive to me, anyway, I've enjoyed writing the story and that's usually a good sign.

• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-04-04

  OK, look, you've got a good bit going on and I really like your story. What it IS missing is clearly Hermione and Ron. I don't know if you're being hesitant about it or you don't like the characters, and if the latter, then fine. If you don't like them change them and play on it but they need to be used in a Harry Potter story, even as a side now. HELL, you could get an extra 10 to 20K in words if you were to edit the whole thing and add their perspective into it. The bottom line is that they're canon and round the story out to be more than one dimensional. Right now you are so focused on Harry, Bella and Marietta that it's starting to lose its luster. I'm still going to read the story and do enjoy it, however without the other aspects of the Harry Potter universe, I'm afraid that I'm starting to get bored. You've already got the Horcruxes destroyed and about to go into battle and we don't even have a perspective of what is going on with the other important characters like Remus, Tonks, Hermione, Ron, Luna, Neville, Ginny, not to mention the DA members that were really beginning to start to have a synergy with the story.
  
  Geovanni Luciano

  Author's response

  Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. I do have the school chums arriving on the occasion of Bill and Fleur's wedding, lots of juicy story bits there, don't want to say too much more.

• Family Issue

  (#) harrysfriend 2007-04-05

  Honestly i don't usually review stories on ficwad because I am mostly looking for PWP when I am here. Your story however with some othe exceptions is great. I think I might of reviewed earlier chapters as well but I must admit that your story is progressing marvolously. I still want to lobby for a position for Ginny in Harry's growing harem.

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and reviewing, and your kind comments. I don't want to say too much, but I did establish in this story that Harry has a thing for redheads. . .

• Family Issue

  (#) selenepotter 2007-07-25

  Oh, I know!
  I get these mysterious bad ratings from people who don't review too.
  Oh course we can fight that by giving positive reviews to the fics we like.

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