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The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2007-04-08
Great update. Is it the end of the Bitch Nurse yet? I don't like her.
Anywho, more soon please.Author's response
Well, it IS the end of the BN, I'm sad to say. I don't think anyone liked her, but I liked how Ava reacted... :)The Mistake
(#) riaryder 2007-04-09
Sorry, my reviews are crap today.
But I just wanted you to know that was ace. :-)Author's response
Your reviews are never crap my friend!!! I appreciate just knowing that you liked it! :) So thank you!The Mistake
(#) JokeMeKisses 2007-04-10
Gwen-This was incredible as always. But I'd have to say my favorite line was "She really didn't have a reason behind her arguments, only that she had been fighting it for so long, it had become almost like a second nature to do so." Being as stubborn as I am, that line couldn't have captured how I feel half of the time any better. I loved the bit with her therapist. I don't think I've read many other stories that capture it as realistically as you did.Author's response
Well, I know exactly what you mean with always arguing, and after you've chosen a side you just don't back down even after you realize it's completely pointless... Yes, I do that all the time as well. And Thanks about the part with the therapist. It was actually easier to dp than the last ones with Dr. Heinrich in them. I guess it's because I'm studying counseling techniques and we've evolved to more person-centered therapy... it was much more effective in the story I believe. ;) Thank you for your always amazing reviews!The Mistake
(#) LiveLoud 2007-04-11
Finally! I just read through the last few chapters. I'm very sad Patrick is hurt but at least he has Ava to kiss his boo-boos.The Mistake
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-14
The doc Heinrich session was high on the ambiance. Poor Ava…
/Not that Ava was the least bit jealous or anything. Oh no.
She just, you know, wanted to be well informed on what they were talking about before making her presence known./ -> Cuteness!
expecting to see the BN wearing something from the Enema of the State album cover -> Ha ha ha…
I am very much I love with your Patrick (as you must know by now). Glad you didn’t erase this goody!The Mistake
(#) Oreo-child 2007-04-16
For some strange reason, I think that BN should show up out of random in another chapter.The Mistake
(#) rejected_smurf_god 2007-05-25
Ok, I've read this chapter over and over and over again and right now I really want you to write another one. At least. Please. I think that if I read this chapter one more time it's going to crumble into dust. Not kidding even if it is on the computer.
-Peter-
p.s. this is the girl nicknamed Peter only I've taken over my friend's site.
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