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The Mistake
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-06
okie dokie you rule my life - waking up to sucha wonderful update was amazing. lol i loved love the enema of the state reference because you know how both of our a tad obsessed with those damn Blink boys, lol. And that bitch nurse honestly, i love the way Ava handled it though it was perfect - she acted perfectly, awesome job. Well i'm going to have to cut my essay short this time because english class calls in 15 minutes and i am still in my pjs lol. i'll be back later to revamp, and possibly write an essay just for you.
also Ava and Patrick - so cute, i'm in love with them.
amazing job!!
points for you as always.
and i don't want to jinx myself but i think i'm first, which excites me to the max.
xxxxxxoAuthor's response
I knew you'd love the Blink reference... in fact I thought of you as I wrote it. lol. I'm aslo glad you approve of the way Ava handles BN, you know that one was a tough one for me. I'm very glad you liked it...! (Stupid English class... don't they know they're messing with amazing reviews here? Geeze.) Anyway, I lvoe points, and I love you!!!The Mistake
(#) fobgal1 2007-04-06
Ok that was amazing. But poor Matthew, well I kinda have a feeling that he isn't really dead, and that he could possibly be the one behind it all. Update soon please.Author's response
Yay!!! I'm glad you liked... and are YOU the one starting these conspiracy rumors?! (J/k) I'll update soon, my dear. :)The Mistake
(#) danceislife 2007-04-06
YAY!! BN is GONE!!! I was abour ready to manifest myself into your story and kick her ass!Author's response
You know, manifesting yourself into the computer to kick the BN's ass would have been simply superb. But I kind of liked her... I'll miss jealous Ava...The Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-06
Oh sweet baby beetroot, this was amazing. You know I'll review properly later.
Love you B!!!!
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beetroot??? Wow, I am without words... I'm excited about a later review! Love ya!!!The Mistake
(#) moocow 2007-04-06
i saw this story on the featured column on the side. i took a picture of it too!
heheh.Author's response
You took a picture?!?!?! Amazing... this picture I must see!!! :)The Mistake
(#) CoraLiz 2007-04-06
Gwen, you are totally my favorite person in the world... Patrick and Ava: couldn't be any more perfect. You have no need to fret over capturing Patrick, because I am completely in love with him in this story. So stop your worrying!!! Any chance for another update soon?Author's response
Your fav?!? Yay!!! And I'm glad you're in love. I'm slightly in love with my fake Patrick as well... is that healthy?The Mistake
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-04-06
GWEN! My love lol Awesome chapter as always..lol I'm sorry I could not review sooner..I did tell you I was going to work when you were gonna post it and it made me very sad lol sooo..anyway..
The BN..yeah I picture here as this really old lady...with gross greasy hair and just BLAH lol I don't know why..but thats what I keep picturing..haha So Ava definetly doesn't have to worry about Patrick straying away if he went with the image in my head lol.
LA?!?!?!?!! WTH? He shipping her to La? What for..whats out there..whose out there hmmmmmmmm interesting my dear..interesting indeed.
I think I need to take a page out of your book to avoid the sticky situations IE: Patrick, funeral, Mathew, Awkwardness ensues...yeah so thank you for that lol
And as always I loved it my dear..in fact you got a Hot point for the hospital scene...hmmm if only Mc Steamy was there le sigh!Author's response
It is really ok to be a late reviewer, it just gave me something to look forward to, my dear. And you pictures the BN as a really olod lady??? I totally pictured her as kind of a college-aged nursing intern, who is totally cute with red-brown hair, but it like, 5'6 so she's a little taller than Patrick. Oh well... And really, who DOES live in LA? I have no idea, personally. lol I'm very familiar with sticky situations. They're horrid... stay away!!!!! I'm so excited about the Hot Point!!!!! (I really would have put McSteamy in, but I thought it would be tacky for Ava to be all blushing over another guy right after being weird about the BN...)The Mistake
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-04-06
"I don't want to forget Wendy."
I can't stop crying. My uncles dog was put down last night becuase ahe had cancer. And now I can't stop crying.
However, The ALMOST sex scene made me smile through my tears.
Thank you for improving my situation.
~RedAuthor's response
Noooo!!! Poor dog, I'm so sorry you've had such a bad day, but I'm glad you were smiling at least SOME. :)I'll try to keep that smile on your face!The Mistake
(#) LOVELA 2007-04-06
This was good. I loved the therapy session. It was very 'real life.' You were able to capture quite the picture for your readers!Author's response
Thank you! I quite enjoy the therapy sessions, and I'm glad it felt authentic. :)The Mistake
(#) XTinkerbellX 2007-04-07
Yay!
Another lovely chapter to put me back in a good mood.
I always look forward to your updates.
^_^Author's response
Tinkerbell! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I'm even happier it put you in a good mood!!!
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