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Chapter 8 - It's So Thrilling But Also Wrong
18 reviews11 pages 3,345 words, a beasty sex scene and a smack of drama. CO-WRITTEN WITH LOVELA
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Learning to Love Again
(#) danceislife 2007-04-10
I KNEW IT!!! I knew one of her kids was Pete's! AHH!!!Learning to Love Again
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-10
lalalalalalalalalalalala - i'm singing to prevent myself from tears. that was insane, so sad and so dramatic. i completely connect with Shay - and i love the love (lol love the love) between Patrick and her, though they are going through hard times it's like everyone can see her inperfictions except for him, well he sees them but loves them. you are such a terrific writer, i can't wait for more.
we should get ice cream - or a love fern - or a sandwich.
lol.
xxoLearning to Love Again
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-10
OMG!! I love her and Patrick together. Even though they are in trouble. This is such an awesome story. I thought maybe one of the kids was Pete's. Can't wait for more!!Learning to Love Again
(#) MMMramen 2007-04-10
My God. That's all I have to say. I didn't think Shay would do that. But that aside, I'm terribly impressed with your writing. Seriously, when I think back to the first story that I ever read of yours (which was "Enough Room for Two" by the way) you've progressed so much. And that's saying a lot considering I thought "Enough Room for Two" was awesome. You have such a brilliant way with words that it makes me smile and green with envy all at the same time. Truefuckinglove, my dear. You deserve those massive amount of points AND featured stories. Yes, I said storIES. I saw "Those Hands" under the features section, you minx. Admit your talent, damnit.Learning to Love Again
(#) burnbaby_xburn 2007-04-10
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD.
I CANT BELIEVE YOUVE LEFT IT HERE.
THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING STORY IVE EVER READ, EVER.
YOU NEED TO KEEP WRITING AND LIKE NEVER STOP. EVERLearning to Love Again
(#) burnbaby_xburn 2007-04-10
THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING STORY IVE EVER READ, EVER.Learning to Love Again
(#) riaryder 2007-04-10
Ooooooh!
There are not words!You have almost left me speechless.
This, in my opinion, is the best thing you have ever written. And there is a lot to live up to. Both of you.
Just wonderful. Truly.Learning to Love Again
(#) fobgal1 2007-04-10
Holy crap! That was a shit load of drama! I loved every word of it! Please please please update soon!Learning to Love Again
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-10
Oh. My. God.
You are amazing
I'm speachless...
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I can't explain how drawn into this story I actually was! I was practically holding my breath, my heart going a million miles a minute.
You wrote that soooo beautifully!!!
I feel extremely honored to actually be able to rate this one. I really feel like it was probably one of your best chapters yet, and you should be super proud of what an amazing job you have done!!!
LOVED IT! LOVE YOU!
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