Categories > Cartoons > Delilah and Julius > Wedding Crasher
Delilah gets all crazy trying to finish preparing for the wedding, but one thing goes wrong.
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Wedding Crasher
(#) gucci84 2007-04-12
OH SH*T!
No way will she be able to go on with the wedding after that! I wouldn't! I'd be grieving my baby's death for months.
Good story plot. I'm suspecting that this is all Tim's fault. Squinty eyes
There are a few spelling mistakes but other than that keep up this good story. Try adding a little more details; for example, I would of loved to have read about Julius' thoughts as he heard Delilah scream. When a soon-to-be father finds his life partner hurt and pregnant all sorts of fear and bad thoughts come screaming into his head before he even has the chance to react you know? Maybe in your next chapter you can have Delilah's thoughts about what the doctor just told her?
Very original idea and it's at its peak right now. Don't end this here!
Update soon!
-Gucci84Wedding Crasher
(#) panda_1418 2007-04-12
Wow, I would totally die. POOR KIDS! STUPID STAIRS!!! I would write more, but here comes my bro so I gotta jet ... UPDATE SOON!!!!!Wedding Crasher
(#) vaiwandil 2007-04-14
wow... now, that was sudden. I'm wondering how they gonna deal with that ... hell, why couldn't her dad wait downstairs? and if he doesn't like Julius I don't know if he's in his right mind, anyway.
please update soon!
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