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  (#) zaberdeenz 2007-04-15

  THE WAIT IS OVER! raises both hands duuuude, you have no idea how often ive been checking if youve updated! a LOT i tell you, LOT. nod
  well then. i just knew when L&M had to wait by the door and there was a table for six only..i just knew what wasabout to happen, but i kinda hoped that it wouldnt..and then it happened. and i was SO with Chey. if she wont use that fork to hurt Lyn, then I WILL. for some reason, i like that M was such a dork, calling them emo and all, i just love to hate him. ^____^
  and those thoughts, i found them pretty amusing! way to go Amber, extort all the men with sex. LMAO
  now im officially concerned bout Gerard. Lyn wears some revealing clothes and he goes all drooling? WTFrank is up with that dude? hypnotic stare
  well, keep it coming, you know i love it^____^

  Author's response

  WTFrank lol how do come up with those? Sorry I was a bit predictable at the restaurant I couldn't help it. Yeah I like Marcus, I had to sort of make him like Lyn and you love to hate Lyn don't you? Every one seems to like the thoughts so that's good, I was worried about them. I've already update so go read it I'll wait her patiently for your review stands still staring into ficwad space waiting for you to read the next chapter

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  (#) haleyxhomicide 2007-04-15

  God, I hate that bitch, she pissed the fuck out of me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  Author's response

  lol sorry I can't help but laugh when other ppl are mad, don't worry you'll get madder I promise.

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  (#) rejected_smurf_god 2007-04-15

  The thoughts everyone had at dinner were hilarious. Especially Marcus's. I think you should like totally put in a girl fight. Lyn soooo needs one good ass woopin. I'm sure many would agree with me.

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  (#) leitchy 2007-04-16

  i nearly killed myself laughing with those people's thoughts in italics. man, that was hilarious!!!
  
  but really good story =)

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  (#) WynonaKing90 2007-04-23

  fuck gerard.
  oh my gosh, you made me hate my 'lover'...ha ha, as if.
  Lyn is a bitch. i wish he would see through her.
  XXX
  'Well thanks' Gerard said clenching and unclenching his fist 'But we are NOT Emo we are so far....'
  XXX
  psh, they were never emo (i know you know)...they were horror inspired....untill THEY FUCKING SOLD OUT.

  Author's response

  Now we've already talked about them being sellouts haven't we? Now take some deep breaths and let it go pats WynonaKing90 on the shoulder I hope you feel better now.

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