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An average day: Breakfast, jog, Lunch, movies oh yeah and a battle with the god of time
(#) CompetiveSwimmaChick 2007-04-14
WOOT! Oh my... that was an awesome twist in the story! LMAO! "Oh boy.." LOL..... The troan war! Da Da Da Dun (by now you know what that is! =D ) I am dieing of suspense here... what shall happen next? Oh so pumpd for next chappie! So please please pretty pretty please with chocolate (I luv chocolate! Random and off topic....), icing, a cherry, and those really good "Betty Crocker" multi-coloured sprinkles! Please! batters eyelashs and gives puppy dog eyes Anyhow, gr8 susoense there and LUV YA!Author's response
I luv chocolate too! I'm sugar loaded from it. Anyway yea I'll update soon!An average day: Breakfast, jog, Lunch, movies oh yeah and a battle with the god of time
(#) CompetiveSwimmaChick 2007-04-14
Don't mind that Layla person (am I right? The 1st person to review). I'm reviewing!!!! And I think it's awesome. This way (with the short chapters) it adds more suspense and you update sooner. =D LUV YA!Author's response
thanx lots. i'll still try for longer chaptersAn average day: Breakfast, jog, Lunch, movies oh yeah and a battle with the god of time
(#) CompetiveSwimmaChick 2007-04-14
Sry 4 reviewing again.... just wanted to say I rated it exciting!!! Luv ya!An average day: Breakfast, jog, Lunch, movies oh yeah and a battle with the god of time
(#) Riane46 2007-04-14
Yo it looked a bit to short "The bang" chapter, and for "Neil's Plan" was so wierd and random and Neil's Plan is stinky a bit.Author's response
yeah my storie has sank a little, but like I said I'll make the chapters longer,
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