(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-13um, do i sense the loving radiating from patrick? clearly she's entirely too dense from the million other heartbreaks going on around her to notice. tisk tisk. anyways: love this story, keep up the good work.
Author's responseThere may be sparks flying or it could be the fireworks I set off for my own enjoyment...who knows.
I'm glad you are enjoying this story. Thanks for the great reviews!
- Poor Izzy. She's just so fucked up.
And this was one of those chapters that just made me want to shake her. If she wasn't a fictional character, of course :-)
You see how caught up I'm getting in this story?
Now let me just make this clear.
I. Adore. You. xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Author's responseYou are a way too faithful reader/reviewer. Seriously. Izzy's character is based LOOSELY off of myself and my situation with a certain boy. I totally know what it's like to not be able to say no to that one boy in your life.
Thanks for the great review. I adore you!
- Dearest CeCe,
Thank you for updating and being awesome. I feel bad for Izzy, but she does kind of bring it on herself. She needs to forget about dumb old Pete and get with Patrick. I mean, Pete is soooo 2006. 2007 is all about the Patty Cakes. Although, JB might give him a run for the money. Rawr.
Author's responseTo my Lovely Kyle,
You totally did a Rawr at my JB! YOU BITCH! No, just kidding. I know that Pete is soooo 2006, but I'm getting the feeling she is lost with the times...what do we do? I have some ideas in my cute little head that I'll whip up one of these days into a big batch of drama just for you, my darling. You just wait. There will be some Pete, Patrick, and JB for your RAWRing pleasure.
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-17Poor Izzy/ Bella... torn, confused... in love with... hm, at least two guys. (Not sure about JB really.)
And Patrick... sighs... Um, so... since Izzy doesn't want him - can I?
Author's responseDude, I gave you Joe and now you want Patrick too! Man...selfish much? No, I'm just kidding. Sure take the buscuit, but be gentle with him. I think Katy roughed him up the last time she had him...Smooches my dear!
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-25Oh wow, now the other Chapter is even more amazing! CeCe....Dio you know how INCREDIBLE this chapter was??? I hope this wasn't the chapter you'd finished and were worrying about the other day ebcause it was everything the story needed.
I adored: "Patrick had his head leaning against the door frame as he looked up at me with his deep eyes. His hand was still continuing the knocking motion." that was just cutest thing ever BTW
The closure around JB and Iz was perfect, it had this element of time, even though it was only done in one chapter, you wrote it perfectly, the build up and decline of their ending relationship.
The phone call to Pete was devastating and I felt utter sorrow for Iz at that point.
Then buscuit sweeps in and just maes the chapter even more amazing than it already was. THANK YOU!
Author's responseActually, this was the chapter that was giving me doubts on even continuing this story. Thanks so much for being the ever presence of support during this, however. You and the rest of the DoJ are fabulous, and you keep me going. This review has just made my day or night. I haven't slept yet. You are INCREDIBLE.
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