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• Family Issue

  (#) DrT 2007-04-14

  My goodness, that's going to be a heck of a wedding, with Ginny, Gabrielle, and Hermione (!) all gunning for Harry (why not send Luna after him, too?) and Voldemort trying to crash.
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Thank you for reading and taking the time to review (love reading re-ordered, by the way!)
  Oh yeah, all sights are on Harry, and Voldemort will be crashing the wedding - should be fun.

• Family Issue

  (#) Essedyss 2007-04-14

  Wow. Harry's got a LOT of women who want to 'talk' to him. I loved Hermione's solution to Ron's morning visits. lol I also have a feeling that Molly's love potion is not going to work well at all or if it does those involved won't like the outcome. Anyways, can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon and keep'em comin!

  Author's response

  Thanks, as always, for reading and taking the time to review. What can I say, Molly's getting a little desperate here. I think you'll like the outcome though.

• Family Issue

  (#) Black_s_Phoenix 2007-04-14

  As a suggestion... do not include Hermione or Ginny in a relationship with Harry as it would completely throw throw off his relationship with Marietta or at the very least the dynamic of the relationship which is what makes the fic what it is as a whole.

  Author's response

  Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing. I had originally intended to leave the old characters out all together, but I felt it would make for an interesting plot twist to introduce Harry and Family to the gang. The story kinda wrote itself from there.

• Family Issue

  (#) lycus 2007-04-14

  Great Chapter. And It Looks Like Hermione Does Love Harry And For That I Will Love You Forever. And You Exposed Harry's Obsession With Ginny In HPB For What It Was. Thank You For Not Falling For The I Suddenly Love Ginny CRAP. And If Ron Really Cared For Hermione Would He Really Have Acted The Way He Did In HBP.Trying To Hurt Her By Throwing His Relationship With Lavender In Her Face. As A Matter Of Fact Ron Was The only Person Who Didn't Act OOC. Oops Sorry About That Rant MY BAD.

  Author's response

  Thanx for reading and reviewing. Don't apologize for the rant, I'm a dyed in the wool H/Hr shipper from the word go. Anyone who doesn't see that those two belong together has to be delusional IMHO!

• Family Issue

  (#) iamspammer 2007-04-14

  Great story. Can't wait for next chapter.
  
  Please, please, please, dont include Hermione, Ginny in there. And dont make any potions work which might make it more tragic and dramatic.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and reviewing. Funny thing, in my original outline I had Bellatrix taking a timed potion that would kill her when the umbilical cord was severed - she didn't want to revert to type.

• Family Issue

  (#) dmc001 2007-04-14

  hehe i hope the next chapter is as good as im thinking is going to be. And please dont include hermione or ginny in the relationships with harry, i dont hate them but it will just break the line with the other chapters and with the story.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and reviewing. What can I say, I'll dissapoint someone no matter what I do . . .

• Family Issue

  (#) wesley 2007-04-14

  I noticed your other reviews for this chapter so decided to add mine.
  
  Don’t listen to what readers tell you to included for the story. Suggestions for improvement are fine but when they start telling you which character fit the story YOU as the author are writing that’s not on.
  
  You’re the author you know your characters, add who you will and stick to your plan.
  
  Having said that, I like this chapter and liked Belle turning Harry down. Really, the way he proposed was stupid. “I doubt I’ll be able to follow through with this, but, …will you marry me?” (Shakes head “real romantic”) Perfect example of Harry’s clueless-ness about women.
  
  I can’t wait to see how everything plays out, all the talks, potions, hormonal veela. LOL Poor Bill and Fleur though, all those Aurors crashing there wedding. And Voldemort, oh my.

  Author's response

  Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, poor Bill, imagine the epitath, Here lies Bill, screwed into the ground . . .
  Let's just say Harry's timing is a bit off and leave it at that for now.
  Stick to my guns, good advice! Thanks.

• Family Issue

  (#) flower123 2007-04-15

  WHY DID SHE SAY NO!? and hopefully it does end at the wedding!update soon

  Author's response

  Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing. As I'm fond of saying, ask me no questions and I'll post you now spoilers! I'll update tomorrow (Wednesday)

• Family Issue

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-04-16

  Looking back I didn't take the opportunity to review this one. It seems that you're looking to add Hermione to the mix on this one, but at the same time you've added so many other people into the mix that have unanswered questions. Not that I don't mind a good, well written, Harry/Gabrielle story, but it has to be well written. I'll stand for none of that smutty no plot stuff, Jaconais' HOPE would be a good example of well written. :)

  Author's response

  Thanks, as always, for reading and reviewing. I've been following "Hope" for a very long time, I think it's the best Harry/Gabrielle story to date, but I get to play in their sandbox too. . .
  I think you'll like the storyline.
  N!

• Family Issue

  (#) master_gundam 2011-12-15

  i agree with glazedlookineyes101 gin's not evil and these are the effects without the potion and i am very much looking foward to gabi's reveal
  gabi and gin are my favorite girls for harry with fleur, luna and tonks following close behind
  after that it depends heavily on the quality of the writer and stuff
  
  i found this by searching for gabriel and this showed up

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