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9 reviewsAU ignores HBP As Harry realizes where his friends loyalties lie he goes on a journey to discover himself and the power to defeat vodemort
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If only for a moment
(#) sweetgirl 2007-04-14
This is a good story. I hope you continue it. I would love to see where you take this story. Please continue.If only for a moment
(#) bmatsea 2007-04-14
that was a very powerful start for a story. very well writen, looking forward to more if you deside to continue.
bmatIf only for a moment
(#) AnnF 2007-04-15
Would help the bit at the end if you italicized the journal entry. Also, might be better if you skipped the access to Harry's money, especially beyond D. (After all, if you were told by your bank that one of their employees was bribed to let many people take money from your account, would you trust that bank ever again?)
If this the summer after OOtP would also help if at the top of the story you mention that, so there is no question of when.If only for a moment
(#) Black_s_Phoenix 2007-04-15
Don't know how this could be a one shot as it reallly dosn't come to a definite ending point. It is fairly good though and definetly interesting.If only for a moment
(#) slashslut 2007-04-15
ho else has betrayed harry? cant wait to read more! update soon!If only for a moment
(#) Alorkin 2007-04-15
This is an interesting and anger filed beginning. While I am a dedicated Harry/Hermione shipper, I think you have a good story here. I have placed this on my 'alerts' list and hope to read more soon. AlorkinIf only for a moment
(#) abhi1234 2007-04-17
it is excellent plot but many authors have written on this plot. so u will have to be fresh in writing.u have a good writing style and if i offer a suggestion please don't make it supper harry. in a soceity harry should not only strive for magical power as well as political and financial power. also please don't make this story about anguish and wimp harry.
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