- That was hot. xD.
What was she saying, anyway? I got the gist of it, but I don't know the exact wording. x|.
Great chapter! I can't wait for their wedding! More!
Author's responseGracias! I try. XD
Here are the translations: "Just make love to me." (Solo amame) and "Tonight is a night of sex. I am going to complete your fantasies. Nobody can touch you like I can. Nobody can do it like I can. You're mine. Always."
(I hate translating it, cuz it never sounds as sexy as it does in Spanish. Haha.)
And more SHALL be on the way...
(#) prissynblack 2007-04-24once gain you come up with the most brilliant well written chapters. I just love this story and when I rea dit it makes me want to smile for some reason.This sounds crzy but you inspire me to write more then i do. I really dont want this story to end. Plz update soon:)
Author's responseOh my gosh. Thank you! Wow, that really means a lot. I'm glad this story is doing more than just a way to relieve my boredom. You say this story makes you smile? Well, you saying that it does makes ME smile. Thank you again. "I love you. I ain't kiddin'."
- ok... oh. my. god!!! wow, god youre amazing!!!! that was soooo good. wow, im a little speechless, partly cause of the amazing chapter and because you dedicated it to me!!! im so happy!! made my day, it really has :D i loved it, and i love this story!! hehe, the return of the black lace underwear... ryan was hilarious, and brendon for that matter, in the shop. that made me laugh!
but omg, next chapter is the LAST ONE?!?! NOOOO!!! :( goes to cry :( doesnt change the fact that I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Geets xx
Author's responseThnks. No, YOU'RE amazing. You got me thinkin' of all those steamy encounters. LMAO. So, of course I dedicated it to ya. ;)
Yeah, next chapter = last. Unless it's too long and I have to post in more than one part or something, but I dunno. I haven't finished writing it. XD
NO! Don't cry. Makes Jon hand over a tissue
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-04-26giggles like a mad woman
I just keep reading the part about US it's just,....
GOD WOMAN I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up!!!!
and i pray for this never to end.
Author's responseAw giggles like Patrick stump (Yeah, if you've never heard it before, it's instant love but anyways...) thanks. Glad you liked it! I know it was a little short, but I think I captured it pretty well. :D
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