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*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) Ace_Fan_12 2007-04-24
-" Oh great! We lost them!" said Jay in anger. Odie helped Atlanta up.
-" Where's Archie?" asked Atlanta as she rubbed her head.
-" The mutant lion took him.." said Odie.
-" But what does the lion want with Archie?" asked Atlanta. Odie and Jay shrugged.
MEANWHILE...
-" Wow..where am I?" said Archie as he woke up. He realized he was chained to the wall.
-" Ah, finally! I've been waiting so long for this day..." said a female voice...*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) frenchfish 2007-04-24
cool, update soon...everyone. If I could find out where to sing up for this thing, I would. Do tell me if I can
much love
~Atla~*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) Theresa599 2007-04-24
Um...i would but I lost track of where this story ws going.*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) Riane46 2007-04-24
"ARRRCCCHHHIIIEEE" yelled the gang.
"HELP!" yelled Archie, with a scared expression.
"We have to rescue him" said Atlanta, worried about Archie.
"Ok, but we don't know where that, umm, lion went with Archie, we have to get a plan" Jay said, seriously.
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Hey, if someone already had reviewed before me, I'm sorry.*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) Riane46 2007-04-24
Ok, I got in track, now, ummm...
"Who are you" demanded Archie, angrilly.
"I'm the goddess of darkness" said the female, impatiently "I'm the one who kills your friends and you".
"What!? Your sick in the head" said Archie, half scared.
Meanwhile....
"Ah, I'm tired" cried Neil.
"Neil, get your butt over here, and let's go find Archie" Jay yelled at Neil.
"Fine!" Neil cried "Argh! I broke a nail". The others snickered and then started to laugh. Neil went angry.
"Ok, guys, let's keep Neil here, if he's to worry about broken something else from his" Jay said, laughing.
"No time, let's keep going" Theresa said, seriously. Neil went boiling hot with anger.
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