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Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) luckysgc921 2007-04-25
I forgot to add...that despite my last review (and being mad at patrick) The sex was still hot. so I rated you hot.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-25
I love your writing. The end made me cry. They "really" need to get together. More soon!!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) riaryder 2007-04-25
Ok, so hand's up who was running away with themselves? The nurse in me had given poor Petra ovarian cancer in my head because I didn't read the damn thing right (the midwife in me is deeply ashamed) :-)
Bad, bad Patrick. Taking advantage of a drunk girl. Despite that, I do like this Patrick that you write. He seems that much more human than the usual shy and bumbling Patrick that gets written on here.
And what a situation. This definitely spells trouble.
Marvellous, my little tutti frutti xMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-25
oh my jeeze - you know i had this funny feeling that Patrick had slept with her when she was shammered - it was so good though,
i am glad it's his though, yes i'm sick and twisted, lol but now there are so many ways the story can go.
great job katy!!!
points for you.
xxo.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) lonerstreet 2007-04-25
OMG I'm at the edge of my seat. Can't wait to read the next chapterMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) lclutebark 2007-04-25
Gah!!!!!
Seriously, i'm also here just waiting to know what's happening next... gahMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) fobgal1 2007-04-25
Aww poor Patrick! Petra better keep the baby! Update soon please.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-25
eek, i wish they werent so dense. keep up the fantastic work. ill be waiting patiently for more.
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