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Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) LOVELA 2007-04-25
Hi! Horrible person here. Katy! When I got to the bottom of reading in mock speed because it was so good and see the words in bold, I was like, "Yeah, I'm the last to review...nice." SORRY! I do have a good excuse, however. Really. I was at a baseball game watching JB, of course. What else would I be doing...having a life? Not likely.
Onward to the review. FABULOUS! I really wish we could rate stories with that word or PHENOMENAL! because that is what this chapter is. It's PHENOMULOUS! YES! New Word! I think you wrote the chapter out so very well. It was good to see both sides of the situation too. You made the readers both sympathize and question both characters...well, I did anyway. I told you people would pee. Now look. I can't wait to read more. You are too too good!
Smooches!!
PS: Thanks for the chapter!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) halleluiakid 2007-04-27
oh dang!
=x
Patrick was kind of a 'man' right there HAHA. having sex with a drunken girl, that's lame.
poor thing.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-05-08
Petra felt that at times, stealing sleep out of the day, was the only way to dismantle the thoughts in her head. She always reasoned that sleeping forced her brain to deal with the issues instead of her, that whilst in the sub-conscious state of slumber, her worries were filed into categories of priority and relevance and when she woke up, they'd all be ready for her to process, like an efficient underpaid secretary. -> So true and so perfectly and beautifully put, Katy. I love this.
Why does Patrick tell her she had sex with him in such an annoying, drag-every-little-word-out-of-my-ass way?! Ach… biscuit men…
… So, I am catching up? If ficwad lets me? Need to go to uni right now though… blah…
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