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*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) jade_kwl_name_eva 2007-04-28
Back with Jay, odie Herry and Neil.
"Guys, I think I've found them!" Odie said. The three boys ruched over to Odie and looked down at his laptop.
"They seem to be in some sort of cave." Odie said. There were three flashing dots, two were together but one was on the move.
"Looks like someone has tried to escape." Herry said. jay quickly walked towards Herry's truck.
"It might be Theresa. C'mon, we have to go find them!"*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) Ace_Fan_12 2007-04-29
"Guys look! Isn't that Theresa?" asked Odie as he has a figure comming closer to them.
"Ya! It is! Theresa! Over here!!" yelled Jay. But Theresa didn't respond. She took out some kind of gun and aimed it at everyone.
"What are you doing Theresa?" asked Jay, but Theresa shot something at them.
"I'm sorry Jay" was all Jay heard, until everything went black..*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) Riane46 2007-04-29
"JAY!" Herry, Odie and Neil yelled.
"What did you do that for?" asked Herry angrilly.
"I'm sorry guys" sobbed Theresa.
"That's all?" demanded Neil curiously "Only a sorry?"
"I'm sorry Cronus told me to bring you guys to the... cave or to him or whatever, I don't know" still a sobbing Theresa.
"That creep, what do we do now?" asked Herry.
"Continue our Journey" Odie replied.
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Was that ok with you? I'm trying to brainstorm a bit.*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) Magic144 2007-05-01
Theresa fought back the tears that wanted to cascade down her delicate cheek. Noticing this, Cronus pressed the mind control button, and Theresa's eyes were glazed with a crimson red.
"Now, bring me Archie and Atlanta, like the good little puppet you are" ordered Cronus.
Theresa knew she had to fight the will to obey, but was unsuccesful. She slowly walked down the path where Archie and Atlanta were hiding.*Make-Up Story!!*
(#) Riane46 2007-06-16
"Archie? Atlanta?" asked Theresa.
"Theresa!" they exclaimed in happiness.
"I'm sorry" scoffed Theresa. Theresa hit them with bricks. Untill they felt unconcious, she stopped and put them in the portal.
"Good Theresa" laughed Cronus.
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