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Ok guys, so recently, I got a few complaints of this story being a bit confusing. So I'm going to rewrite the whole story so you guys could see where we are.
Theresa burst out laughing for no appearnt reason when out of no where something randomly hit her on the head.
"Jay!!!Was that you?!!!"Theresa asked while yelling.
"Well, typical much."Atlanta said sighing.
Until something randomly grabbed both Theresa and Atlanta and ran off.No one knows where they went.//
" Atlanta? Theresa? Where are you guys?" asked Jay as he looked around.
" Maybe they went to get some ice cream!" suggested Archie, but Jay was not satisfied.
" Or maybe Cronus got them!" said Jay. But as soon as he turned around, the same person that got Atlanta and Theresa grabbed Archie and ran away, leaving Jay alone..//
"Guys, this is not funny!" Jay shouted out to his missing team mates.
Herry and Odie came jogging up to Jay.
"Have you seen Theersa, Archie or Atlanta?" Jay asked. The others shake their heads until they hear someone scream...//
"What no, why?" asked Odie.
"Because they just dissapeared out of nowhere." answered Jay.
"Guys! Where are you?" called Herry.
"It's not going to work. I already tried calling." said Jay.
"Who do you think did it?" asked Odie, typing away on his laptop.//
Meanwhile, Theresa, Atlanta and Archie were bewildered at where they were. They were surrounded by dark shadows moving fertively around them, guarding them so they couldn't escape.
"Where are we?" aske Atlanta
"Seems to me were stuck in some sort of cave." stated Archie
"Hey! Our weapons are missing"shouted Atlanta annoyed.
"Well come on, lets look for a way out of here!"
They walked around the cave's walls, as they desperately searched for a way out, and tried contacting the others, without sucess. Suddenly, they heard a loud, piercing growl, they turned around only to face...//
'Come on guys,' Theresa said, leading her two friends. 'I think I see a light down there. Archie? Atlanta?' She spun around to face...a never ending darkness surrounding her. 'Guys?' She called out again. 'Where are you?'
'So nice to see you, Theresa.'
'Where are they--'
'Theresa, my dear, your friends are fine, for now. Do what I say and they will not get hurt. Understand?'
Theresa glared at him but nodded sadly.
'Just so long as they don't get hurt,' Theresa said angrily. 'What do you want me to do?'..
Well, this is the story so far guys! I hope you can all follow it now and I hope you guys are able to continue it! And for all of you who think that you have to be a member to do this, there is no membership! You just review and continue the story just like you want it, BUT it has to make sense and follow the story! So go ahead guys! Have fun!=)
Theresa burst out laughing for no appearnt reason when out of no where something randomly hit her on the head.
"Jay!!!Was that you?!!!"Theresa asked while yelling.
"Well, typical much."Atlanta said sighing.
Until something randomly grabbed both Theresa and Atlanta and ran off.No one knows where they went.//
" Atlanta? Theresa? Where are you guys?" asked Jay as he looked around.
" Maybe they went to get some ice cream!" suggested Archie, but Jay was not satisfied.
" Or maybe Cronus got them!" said Jay. But as soon as he turned around, the same person that got Atlanta and Theresa grabbed Archie and ran away, leaving Jay alone..//
"Guys, this is not funny!" Jay shouted out to his missing team mates.
Herry and Odie came jogging up to Jay.
"Have you seen Theersa, Archie or Atlanta?" Jay asked. The others shake their heads until they hear someone scream...//
"What no, why?" asked Odie.
"Because they just dissapeared out of nowhere." answered Jay.
"Guys! Where are you?" called Herry.
"It's not going to work. I already tried calling." said Jay.
"Who do you think did it?" asked Odie, typing away on his laptop.//
Meanwhile, Theresa, Atlanta and Archie were bewildered at where they were. They were surrounded by dark shadows moving fertively around them, guarding them so they couldn't escape.
"Where are we?" aske Atlanta
"Seems to me were stuck in some sort of cave." stated Archie
"Hey! Our weapons are missing"shouted Atlanta annoyed.
"Well come on, lets look for a way out of here!"
They walked around the cave's walls, as they desperately searched for a way out, and tried contacting the others, without sucess. Suddenly, they heard a loud, piercing growl, they turned around only to face...//
'Come on guys,' Theresa said, leading her two friends. 'I think I see a light down there. Archie? Atlanta?' She spun around to face...a never ending darkness surrounding her. 'Guys?' She called out again. 'Where are you?'
'So nice to see you, Theresa.'
'Where are they--'
'Theresa, my dear, your friends are fine, for now. Do what I say and they will not get hurt. Understand?'
Theresa glared at him but nodded sadly.
'Just so long as they don't get hurt,' Theresa said angrily. 'What do you want me to do?'..
Well, this is the story so far guys! I hope you can all follow it now and I hope you guys are able to continue it! And for all of you who think that you have to be a member to do this, there is no membership! You just review and continue the story just like you want it, BUT it has to make sense and follow the story! So go ahead guys! Have fun!=)
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