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Chapter 11
8 reviewsPeyton Clarkson's boyfriend had just signed with one of the biggest recording companies around, and now hes heading out to tour with another major band, Fall Out Boy. What happens when he can't alw...
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(#) williebaby 2007-04-28
ooh i just sat down and read all 11 chapters of this, and i like it! more soon, k?
(also, my favorite are white chocolate macadamia nut hehe)Author's response
OoOoOo thats my favorite too...and I actually do have those in the freezer..hmmmm...lol but I'm glad you liked it...I hope you will read the rest to when I finish it lolFalter
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-28
Ahhhh!!!!
Rindi, my dear, you are amazing. But you know that, so I'm doing you a terrible injustice by just telling you so in this review. Why oh why aren't you online????
Ok, anyway... Peyton and Patrick... sigh They are too adorable. Like him playing with her hand and the cuteness that followed... oh wow. I want one. Can I have one???
And Gwen and Pete? Is this Peter actually being a good person? I think so. And I totally adore Battleship. I think Gwen would totally kick Pete's ass in the game.
And Oliver is SUCH a jerk!!! I'm soooo happy Peyton has come to her senses and is planning on dumping the asshole. Seriously, she needs to punch him in the face.
Ok, well, as always I totally loved it. LOVED IT! You are especially spectacualr this time, and you need to know that. I think you should just always write and write... you know screw work and Pandy (lol). I know what's really important in life.
Fantastic job!!! Points to you my friend. I can't wait until you're online (or at least awake so I can text) so I can blab to you about this chapter! LOVED IT (again) and LOVE YOU!Author's response
AHHHHHH!!! GWEN!!!! lol you my dear are amazing as well with your revies...I swear..you should just write a novel of reviews LOL. Ok where to start on your review...lol the Peyton/Patrick hand thing..yeah I imagined Pandy the entire time, le sigh! LOL and if you want to have some of my Pandy..I will try to share LOL Yes Peter is being a good person, he's not the pompous ass that everyone actually thinks he is..he has a good head on his shoulders and compliments Gwen quite well. Anywho, yes Peyton has come to her senses but at what cost...as you can see how Oliver reacts there..can you imagine what is in store? I can WOOT lol. LOL and you want me to screw Pandy at work?!?! OMG that would be HAWT LMAO jk lol but I'm soo glad you liked it...it made my life...Falter
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-28
PS, I'm very excited about cookies. Yummm...Author's response
I think I'm gonna bake some tomorrow on my day off..lolFalter
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-28
Glad she is going to break it off with Oliver. Love the story.Author's response
LOL me too..its about damn time PeytonFalter
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-04-29
ahhhh you kick ass!
update soon!Author's response
OMG whose ass did I kick?!?!
lol I will try to my dearFalter
(#) LOVELA 2007-04-29
Yes, I loved this chapter. The entire storyline based around Patrick and Peyton has got to be the cutest, sweetest thing ever. It makes me sigh with content because it is just that cute! I do worry about Oliver and the whole breaking it off with him. I'm thinking that can only end badly. Thanks for updating!Author's response
I worry about Oliver to sometimes..maybe he should take out his anger on something..or someone Idk...lol But I'm very happy that you liked it!Falter
(#) riaryder 2007-05-02
I demand a man-fight.
Patrick and Pete v that Oliver :-)
And can I just say things are hotting up nicely. I just love sexy laid-back Patrick.
I will give you a point if you make chocolate chip xxAuthor's response
mmm Chocolate chip...lol I really need to make me some cookies now HAHA and there will be man fights...tee hee
I also love sexy laid back Patrick..he makes me swoon
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