Categories > Books > Harry Potter > Lost
- Very nice start. I liked the almost stream of consciousness nature of the monologue. It got a bit rough at parts, like how Hedwig's fate seemed forced somehow, but in general I liked it and I am looking forward to seeing where this story goes. With just this bit we have no hint of the eventual plot.
Will the Wizarding World once again need Harry to do their dirty work? Will they plead and beg his forgiveness until he acquiesce? Or will he be forced to intercede by either the "good guys" or the bad threatening his family?
- sorry to say, so far its nothig completely new... i hope to see how you build on this. and hopefully see how harry re-enters the wizarding world. plus also more info is needed abou his wife and daughters, i know they will play an integral part in teh story...
sorry to hear abou hegwig, she has been his only ever true friend, and its sad to see her gone so early in the story...
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