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• Empty house not heart

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-05-17

  I'm only going to give you one piece of advice: Never change your style/plot of writing because of what others say. You have truly received respect as a writer with what you do already so change anything. This is my motto here on ficwad, even if people didn't understand my story, yeah, it upset me alittle, but I never changed my plot or the way I was carrying out tthe story because that's how I write or that's how I was writing that particular story. This applies to you too. You should be reassured with the reviews and the support you're getting that we don't you to change a single thing about this story.
  
  It's truly captivating.
  
  I adore it, in every sense and way and feeling possible.
  
  Thank you for putting something original and insightful on here.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  Author's response

  I don't know what else to tell you but, wow. Thank you. I read this and i was just in shock. I cried because I didn't think anyone would really be this genuine and honest. Just, wow......
  
  I am my own worst critic, and i pretty much dislike most of what I write. To me it is almost uncomprehensible that others can value what i write. To me, i have the worst grammar, worst punctuation, and even my writing style could be soo much better. This all stems from me being a perfectionist. I know this. Reviews, as amazing as they are. To me, i think i am unworthy of them. Trust me, my friend thought I was crazy because I was depressed that i had 45 reviews. I just believe that there are so many other stories that have a better plot, are better written, and are more captivating. Regardless of my own little depressing rant, I just need to truly thank you for reading this and writing this comment. I will try to take your advice. I look forward to updating, just so i can read your kind words. I really do appreciate you and your reviews. Thank you

• Empty house not heart

  (#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-18

  It was nice that Michele came out and told Patrick she still cared for him. It made me cry. I really like how you have them interact with one another.

  Author's response

  Aww thank you. I was really nervous about this chapter because I want their interaction to seem real. I do want to show that, they both still love eachother but its hard.
  
  Thank you soo much for reading this story and reviewing.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) ssketchator 2007-05-18

  I love stories that are unplanned. I think it gives you more freedom when each chapter takes on its own life.
  
  I like how they're both trying not to upset the other, but they're both too emotionally invested to just shut up and walk away. I think anyone can relate to that.
  
  Still loving this.

  Author's response

  I like to have a little idea of where I am going, with this one i do see potential with it being completely unplanned. I am trying to come up with a really complete story. With that, i also don't know how long this story will be. Anyway, thank you for reading it and for loving it. That means a lot to me, to know other people like this story when even I can find so many flaws. I want Patrick and Michele's interaction to be as "real" as possible, when you fight with someone you love you can't help but be so emotionally involved to not get angry, or fustrated. Even after a break-up it doesn't mean you stop loving them.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) xharlequingirl 2007-05-19

  oooola la! I can't wait to see what happens next. Well, I think I know, but that's only because I got those best friend privledges. This is wonderful and yes follow all of their advice about just pleasing yourself. You know I've been sayin

  Author's response

  You dont know nuttin hunnie! hahah.okay, maybe you do. just a little bit but SHHHHHHH. Yeah, well you know how i feel about my stories anyway. You listen to my rants alll the time. well.. hopefully i can finish the next chapter.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) RebeccaRambunctious 2007-05-19

  im in a puddle of tears. this story is... beautiful

  Author's response

  A new reader! YAY! You made me happy. But, i am sorry that my story made you cry. Thank you though. I have been completely floored that people have read my story and it invoked some kind of emotion. I think that is what any author strives for and the response to this story just leaves me in shock. Thank you soo much for reading this story.

• Empty house not heart

  (#) newyorkeyes 2007-05-21

  YES! I come back and there are not one, but two updates! I had a busy weekend so I didn't get a chance to read, but this is amazing. I'm just speechless. I can't believe it. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! This is fantastic work. You are a genius!

  Author's response

  Thank you soo much! As you can tell after reading the next chapter, it is a shocker. I'm a genius? hhaha. Thats funny, but thanks! I am glad you can relax after your busy weekend with this story.

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