(#) watch_the_sky 2007-05-23my heart is absolutely breaking. i feel so bad for shay living with the guilt, but i feel even worse for patrick, who is right now, left entirely in the dark to everything that is going on. i cant wait to read more, this is an amazing story and its written so well.
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-23That is right, review number 10! Post that mofo.
I am so happy that Shay finally realized that she belongs with Patrick. Superficially because I'm sick of Pete cockblocking Patrick. But moreseo because they have such an established connection, something so right and wholesome that it would be a shame to be lost.
Every dot com's refreshing for a [story] update. Oh I went there.
- Here you two go, making me beg. Before I gush my emotional ass off about how this chapter made me feel, I just want you to know how sick you are and how much I admire your twisted plan to hold the next chapter hostage. With that said: WOW. Just wow. Would this be considered a transitional chapter? I think it is. I love how Sue guides Shay, gently at times. And other times, she just spells it out for her. When Shay realized that her feelings for Petard were purely physical, my heart leaped out of my chest and sang hallelujah! Pete may be a sexy mammajamma, but Patrick is just...Patrick-licious. And I'm getting a sense that Patrick might be forgiving Shay. He sees what a good mother and wife she is and perhaps he's trying to remember what he loves about her too. I love how deep you go and how you overlap all these emotions, which is how life is. Just overlapping. I'm insanely jealous and I strive to be a better writer because of this story. Pointage, my loves.
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-05-28I bet this chapters wasn't easy to write. I couldn't write a story like this, that's for sure.
I find it weird that Shay didn't realize that what she felt for Pete was mainly based on their physical encounters though. But I've done my fair share of lying to myself or pretending to be blind towards the obvious. So, it's perhaps human. Sad, sad humans.
Patrick is brilliant. Not necessarily how he treated Shay and his family before but there's just so much energy a human being has. I can very much relate to his current situation and feelings. Kudos where kudos are due! :)
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