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Show Me What You Got!
(#) danceislife 2007-05-24
I was going to yell and scream if she hooked up with Pete...Show Me What You Got!
(#) divinelycrazy 2007-05-24
Whoa.
Damn Pete for being so tempting.
I'm glad she snapped out of it.Show Me What You Got!
(#) whatkatydid 2007-05-25
OMG, this chapter was funny, hot, exciting, moving and so many other things. I love Rachel! I really miss this story!!!Show Me What You Got!
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-25
Secret loooooverrrrr... good one.
I also enjoyed "ahem hoo haa." Vahoohoo is a good one, if you're ever looking for another awkward euphamism.
Ooh the dramas. I like how you brought up the differences in William and Patrick, and I think the self-consciousness of Patrick in that scene is pretty true to life. Rock.Show Me What You Got!
(#) violent_kisses 2007-05-29
oooh patrick! i wanna see her get with patrick...and tell beckett off like she did pete. lol. sorry...kick ass chapter. more soon!!!Show Me What You Got!
(#) aloneinacrowdedroom 2007-06-02
more please!!
love till the end of forever
~Eliza~Beth~
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