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Chapter 5 Showdown
3 reviewsHarry discovers Dumbledore's and his friends aren't the good guys they pretend to be... in this chapter things start to happen.
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Return of the Black Rose
(#) Cateagle 2007-05-25
And now things get interesting as Albus starts to find out that matters are unraveling from his careful plans. I predict considerable turmoil when he finds out just how far this process has gone before he knew of it. I predict some "interesting" realignments in the power structure of the wizarding world.Return of the Black Rose
(#) Cloudes 2007-05-25
I like the way its going..i would love it if the length could be a little longer...
also is this going to be one of those Voldy and Harry get a longs...i really like those so i do hope it is one...i have always dislive dumbledorkAuthor's response
Harry and Tom do come to an understanding and start working together. I love those stories myself and couldn't resist writing one.
i am working on length; some chapters are longer than others and unfortunately a couple are really really short even by my standards... I've the first 14 written and will be posting them a few a day.Return of the Black Rose
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-09-07
So far I like what you have written so far but it's what is not written that has me a bit leary. You have implied MPREG which leads me to think that this story may end up being slash. I don't particularly care for that and will let you know right now at the first sign I will quit reading. Most author's as a courtesy list SLASH/NO SLASH as a warning to the reader. Food for thought.Author's response
I understand your concerns about slash and I did choose in the options listed as many of the warnings as I could. I don't choose to announce it at the beginning of each chapter as it isn't a major part of my story. Even though this is listed as an adult story I won't be writing explicit porn. While yes eventually their will be a relationship that is m/m/f and one that may be m/m it won't be happening for a long while as my intention is to tell a story not write sex. I hope you keep reading for a while as I am just putting the players in place to start a relationship; in otherwords they aren't formed yet.
I understand your concerns about slash and I did choose in the options listed as many of the warnings as I could. I don't choose to announce it at the beginning of each chapter as it isn't a major part of my story. Even though this is listed as an adult story I won't be writing explicit porn. While yes eventually their will be a relationship that is m/m/f and one that may be m/m it won't be happening for a long while as my intention is to tell a story not write sex. I hope you keep reading for a while as I am just putting the players in place to start a relationship; in otherwords they aren't formed yet.Return of the Black Rose
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-09-09
Good chapter. I don't like male slash either but so far the story is stil readable.
gunny
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