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Harry doesn't trust dumbledore anymore! In this chapter he works out exactly what's happening on the statues... an Order memeber disappears!
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Return of the Black Rose
(#) Cateagle 2007-05-26
And now it starts getting really interesting. I wonder if those statues are going to be traceable to Dumbledore?
Aside from an ocassionally distracting shift of tenses, this is a great read.Author's response
That tense thing is one of the biggest problems I have in writing. I hope that I am actually getting better with it but very few reviewers mention it so i'm never sure.Return of the Black Rose
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-09-07
Yes this is an acknowledgement that Tom Riddle also took the potion although he did it while alone with no witnesses.
This is something that you want written in your story, not buried within your author's notes. Just a word of advice on it. It may be worthy to have a flashback scene to incorporate that into the story.
Geovanni LucianoAuthor's response
I hadn't thought so much about what may have been blocked or suppressed in Tom's memories only that there had been some... I will take your advice to heart, it could prove quite interesting.
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