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Chapter 12 - I Tried To Tell You Before I Left
13 reviewsThis is not a filler, it's transition.
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Learning to Love Again
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-05-28
In my opinion that was one of your best chapters as of now, dear Katy. Perhaps because it had also some humor in it, but mainly because of the harsh clash between Patrick's sweetness and Shay's guilty conscience and knowing that she would kill him by coming clean. That was just extraordinarily well-written.
And Rory is hilarious. Art is for pussies. That's why Pete's an artist, right?Learning to Love Again
(#) ClandestineUnited 2007-05-28
Wow. Katy that was amazing. I laughed so hard when Natalie threw banana at Patrick. Haha.
You write so brilliantly I felt like I was there watching them, that's such an amazing talent you have.
Keep up the good work and I shall try to hold my patience!Learning to Love Again
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-28
Awesome. I really love this story. You have no idea. Can't wait for more as usual.Learning to Love Again
(#) fobgal1 2007-05-28
Gosh.
This chapter was amazing.
But I can tell it's just gonna make it that much harder for Shay.
Please update soon.Learning to Love Again
(#) rainydaykid13 2007-05-28
That was amazing.
It's almost like I was there.
Updates, por favor?Learning to Love Again
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-05-28
Love it.
I always get so excited when you update it makes me smile like this -> :D
ambience points cause it was really like i was sitting at the table with them.
and another thing my heart hurts for Shay and Patrick and i'm torn, i want her to tell him (i know she has to) but at the same time i'm like 'noooooo!'
so there's that. lol.
can't wait for more.
love you.
infinite x's and o'sLearning to Love Again
(#) riaryder 2007-05-28
Yeah, it was all getting just too nice and cosy there for all of a few hundred words!!
The reaction from Rory was great. And Pete always seems to worm himself in somewhere.
And just that wee reminder at the end that everything is not well, beautifully timed.
And oh how I laughed at you pimping your stories.Shameless. ;-) But it seems to have worked, because that's exactly where I'm headed next.
Points and hugs for youxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxLearning to Love Again
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-28
I luff juicy stuff.
Patrick's angry voice made me laugh. And Pete would definitely say something like that.
I'm excited for when she tells him. I do so adore backlash.Learning to Love Again
(#) LOVELA 2007-05-28
Yeah. I'm sitting here reading this chapter wondering why you exactly need me. I tell you this over and over again. You are wonderful and you know you can whip out this drama-rama to the full max with out the constant pestering of me asking questions and making you think and change your mind about things. I'm writing this review so you know that I am still here and not completely vanquished into the non-internet world as of yet. Miss ya!Learning to Love Again
(#) MMMramen 2007-05-29
What the hell is this? How did I not know about an update? HOW??!?!?!!? DAMN YOU, FICWAD! DAMN YOOOOOOOOUU! And I'm off to read. :O
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