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Chapter 12 - I Tried To Tell You Before I Left
13 reviewsThis is not a filler, it's transition.
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Learning to Love Again
(#) MMMramen 2007-05-29
Miss Katy. You are killing me with this anticipation. I love that you're building to the moment, but I just can't wait any longer. OK, I'll wait a couple more chapters, then I'm putting my foot down.
I liked how you incorporated the children more. Up until now, they were kind of a footnote. But you gave us a little peek of what they're really like and how Shay's actions affect them. And I especially like how patient Shay and Patrick are with Aimee and her stammering. And Rory's little tantrum. Very lifelike. I'd give you a point, but FicWad doesn't want you taking them all.Learning to Love Again
(#) halleluiakid 2007-06-18
aww lol, I read all of your stories!
I love your writings!
=DDD
and this one as well
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