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Dementors swarm the castle, the defenders do their best, but will it be good enough?
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The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) Cateagle 2007-06-02
Quite a battle and Tom has definitely scored a strong hit; however, I don't think Harry's quite out of it, yet; down but not out and I'll be interested in seeing what pulls him through. Pity about Ron and Hermione, though.Author's response
Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. No, Harry is not quite out of the woods yet, next he has to face, well, you know.
Did you notice the serious spoiler in the synopsis?The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) xhale 2007-06-03
Ha! This story can't be rated any higher.
I really have no clue where you're going with this story. I was REALLY enjoying it until the end of this chapter.
Right now, you're on the precipice. If you take the story one way, you might lose me as a reader. On the other hand, you could go any number of other ways and create a new story just as awesome as your last one.
All I can say is, I hope the next chapters come quick before I pull all my hair out!The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) xhale 2007-06-03
Ha! This story can't be rated any higher.
I really have no clue where you're going with this story. I was REALLY enjoying it until the end of this chapter.
Right now, you're on the precipice. If you take the story one way, you might lose me as a reader. On the other hand, you could go any number of other ways and create a new story just as awesome as your last one.
All I can say is, I hope the next chapters come quick before I pull all my hair out!The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) xhale 2007-06-03
Ha! This story can't be rated any higher.
I really have no clue where you're going with this story. I was REALLY enjoying it until the end of this chapter.
Right now, you're on the precipice. If you take the story one way, you might lose me as a reader. On the other hand, you could go any number of other ways and create a new story just as awesome as your last one.
All I can say is, I hope the next chapters come quick before I pull all my hair out!Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, as far as where the story is going, lets just say I'm up to chapter 8 and my stories have a way of writing themselves at a point. If I submit chapter 8 as written it'll change the rating of the story, so I'll pare it down a bit to keep the "R" rating. As far as characters, my biggest spoiler is in the synopsis. After that, surprises abound.
Hang in there!
N!The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) xhale 2007-06-03
I'm curious: why pare it down to an R rating? This is one of the few fanfic sites that actually allows "adult" content, be it language or physical.
Are you writing for a target audience? Most HP ficcers (especially the ones not on Fanfiction.net) are adults anyway. :)Author's response
Good point, I may just haul off and change the rating.The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) xhale 2007-06-03
Jesus, too many reviews with my name on them. :)
"Just one small problem, Hermione will be wanting her body back!"
I swear that didn't say that when I sat down to read the chapter last night. WHOA.
I liked you characterization of Myrtle. I also happen to lea towards H/HR (or away from H/G, anyway), so now I'm even more interesting in seeing where this is going.
8 chapters in the can, huh? Don't hold 'em back for TOO long. Please!Author's response
Well technically it's only three in the can, and I almost always revise the chapters a few times before I put em' out there.The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) Cateagle 2007-06-05
Did you notice the serious spoiler in the synopsis?
Yep, I sure did and it'll be interesting to see who gets it or if some "joint tenancy" arrangement can be made. This is going to get even more interesting than it already is.The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) Dragen 2007-10-04
What another great chapter, I like that Harry was able to kill the dementors.
Poor Harry, lossing Hermione and Ron.The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-10-25
Great part there, and Harry was letting Tom have it all there, until he saw what happened to Hermione and Ron. Loved that Lav was able to show off her Gryff colors there, as well as what looked like things with both sets of twins there.
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