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Needing Direction
1 review"When will you abandon these distractions and embrace your destiny?" demanded Amlah. "When my destiny is a hot chick!"
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Deconstruction
(#) armourdude 2006-03-09
This was plain silly. But it also offered a little info that maybe a mistake was made? I thought that this chapter depended more on dialog then actualy doing anything. Also, for a story script it seem to lack discription. I like the discription of the previous chapters.
Author\'s Response: In which last case I look forward to whatever you might have to say about the first chunk of Divinity. I was going for something a little different.
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