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Deconstruction
(#) armourdude 2006-03-15
I found this chapter plesently entertaining. I am realy like this script format. Makes it easier to read and to discribe. The discriptions ore breif to the point. A lot easier then trying to discribe something in a novel format. I do have question. What was the hot chick wearing under her black cloak? This chapter also brings things together I like that. The bit of history and where Emal fits in there. I think that was smoothly done. Another thing, the tour rules. I am guessing that the author has been on a cave tour before. One more thing To comment on. The dialog of the guide while on the tram. That was a fun addition.
Author\'s Response: That's right. I never did say what Sil was wearing. I pictured her in an attractive but very simple black robe-type thing. Not all hot chicks know how to work it. (Yes, I wrote this before there was an Emo.) I've been on plenty of cave tours, but I was thinking more along the lines of "White House" when I got to Mitsie.
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